|Reviews for She's A Temptation|
| Carajillo chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Really good the way you make the description of the characters.
The one a linfomanian, fem fatal and men eater the other one a sleeping pill.
No sexual restriction regarding any desires. She pleases herself at any place at any time. The end is a bit hard.
| Sharky chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Superb Fiona with the curly hair.
| FangIsFexcellent chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
This is surprisingly legit, and your writing is lovely.
I was glad to read something NOT incest or pedophilia, since it seems the majority of fics for this fandom are either Vioklaus or Violaf. Viona seems much more in my comfort zone :P
Thank you for your words.
| Valvox chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I likes it. Very...so...emotional? Not like, ohh so heartfelt, but, the passion and fire was just... there, to look at, practically screaming. You really opened up the wounds that they'd hidden, shown them in their darkest hours, portraying not only their heartbreak and hurt, but the love that they're hiding inside. It was really interesting to read. Not nearly as smutty as you made it out to be, just rather angsty, and kinda 'inside' of their heads.
| Silicon212 chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I cried. I'm still crying.
| Silicon212 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
This was an amazing piece. I literally almost cried. How do you get it so sad like that? It was a great read.I loved it. It fit in with the whole plot of the books really well.
| Meg chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
I really liked this. It not all that smutty, really. I quite enjoyed the unique characterization.
| anon chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
That was brilliant. ...and hot.
| kong is king chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Okay, this was serious bad-ass. There's hardly any femmeslash that takes itself seriously anymore. It's all just PWP. This, on the other hand, was dark, chilling, and oh-so-sexy.
Which is just how it should be.
Kong is King
| saturnella chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Even though I've come to dislike some of your other stories, I found this one quite entertaining. I love how you make it "porny" but in a beautiful writing, which makes it all the more sexy. Violet was good choice, but I'm not sure she pairs up with Fiona very well. It may have been better to hook her up with Izadora, but that's just my opinion. Anywho, very good writing and I will definetly be adding this to my fave stories!
PS. Sorry for the hateful review on your last fan fic...I tend to get carried away when I write reviews!
| Running Timebomb chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Ugh, FIONA! lol sorry, I have problems with that girl, don't kno why. But I liked this, it was very angsty and bitter and it showed what their true characters are like (well I guess except for the sex). It was beautiful in a strange kind of way.
Good work! :D
| Zavi chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
Oh, LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! I normally hate femmeslash, but you had me. MORE LOVE!
Not a big fan of that kind of style, it seems kind of...er...-finds a way to put it- choppy. But it differs from the traditional method, which is good. It reminds me of "Normal", by Sarafu. Did you get inspiration from that?
Zavi's such a bad girl.
| violetnquingleyforever chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
ew! violet would never do that with fiona SHES EVIL STUPID. plus she loves quigley duh. :O
| The Fritz chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
I'm not nearly as familiar with this series as I should be, but this is so pretty. It's hot, and the writing is simply gorgeous. Well done. :D
PS: I never got your Yahoo! screen name, in case you still wanted to give it to me. And I'm sorry I've been bad with e-mailing lately. Damn school.
| chiba-x-thanks chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
This is totally brilliant and wondeful and all those words I haven't used. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES.