Reviews for Chance For Happiness
beauty0102 chapter 16 . 9/3/2013
This is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account check this one everyday
Mashkai30 chapter 16 . 3/9/2013
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
Azrael Jinsei chapter 16 . 11/29/2012
Thank you so much for writing this. It was very good.
scarlettmeadows chapter 16 . 10/6/2012
lol! very nice. cheers!
scarlettmeadows chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
please let harry have another baby!
great fic!
Guest chapter 16 . 6/29/2012
I did enjoy reading this story. It was really sweet and actually fun to read.

That being said, I think that it was a tad bit overdramatic. Like to the point that it was unrealistic. The first time, when Snape left Harry, I understood. It was still rather early in their relationship, and every relationship has its ups and downs. But when Harry leaves Snape later on without even trying to talk about what he'd heard...it's just unrealistic. Sure, he thought Snape cheated on him, but when people are in a relationship that's as invested as Snape and Harry's was at that point, especially when it involves children, they would sooner sit down and talk about the supposed cheating before just taking the kids and running away.

Children need stability and consistency to thrive, and that extends to people that they consider parental figures. Harry comes off as an irresponsible parent because of the seriously overly dramatic fights that you wrote, which were actually completely unnecessary. You already had plenty of conflict going around with Lucius on the loose, but you kind of put that (which rightly should have been the main drama) on the back burner for the melodrama.

In the end, you really didn't even do anything with the Lucius plotline. He just ends up getting caught. No climax to the storyline, no resolution...he just gets caught.

It's a good story, there's just a few things that could be improved upon to make it better.
Danielle.daughter.of.Hermes chapter 16 . 9/4/2011
awh, i really like this story. haven't read anything like it :D Which doesn't happen often xD
George2Bob1 chapter 16 . 8/17/2011
prefect end very cute
WereBunny87 chapter 16 . 4/17/2011
*laughs* good job! I loved it!
musme chapter 16 . 4/12/2011
very sweet, but I like it
summerstorm chapter 16 . 3/28/2011
3 colective Awwwwwwwww!
jess.sree chapter 8 . 12/9/2010
aw snap. i was praying that the baby's name isn't joe... dang, that's a horrible name... imo.
nogin95 chapter 16 . 9/26/2010
only just read this story, but it was great. i loved it so much. Have you/could you do a one shot of the marriage and honeymoon?

(have you - i havent looked at your other stories yet.)

keep writing

NOGIN

XXX
stacersnape chapter 16 . 7/4/2010
Great story. Thanks for writing it.
Madame de Coeur chapter 16 . 6/16/2010
Fuuny! Sad! AWESOME!

Loved it!
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