|Reviews for Through The Fog|
| 12Dee chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
cool, i really like the start of this story. you have used very good examples of descriptive language so the audience is drwn in to the story and feel a part of the scene unfolding. sorry if i sounded like a english examiner, but that is how i feel about this story,
p.s. love the idea
| novaya zemlya chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
I am fascinated by the story so far and I can't wait to hear how it all came to pass!
| Rxc chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
Oo! Very interesting beginning. Lizzy kind of reminds me of those southern ladies who smokes their ciggerate from a long pipe and keeps a small handgun in their purse, in the movies of course. Please update soon.
| Sophie chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
hehehe have you ever read anything by Jennifer Crusie? this is great
| anobledare chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
i love your style!
this is a interesting start.
hope you are writing again soon!