|Reviews for Equilibrium|
| Amanthya chapter 17 . 9/14
No, no, Severus; he's going to get him killed just after he goes through puberty.
I've had to work with people who are unreasonable like Dumbles - the kind that get you mad then patronize you for being upset, who throw you under the bus then act like it was for your own good - look how much stronger you are now! you wouldn't be if I hadn't tossed you under the lorry!
It can drive you mad.
I enjoyed the snowball fight, and especially Severus's line " why thank you, Minerva, flattery is unnecessary, however" or something to that effect. It was very true-to-character.
Glad he manned up and apologized to Harry, poor kid. And that he's learned how to properly speak to him when the boy does something stupidly heroic - emphasis on stupid.
I look forward to reading the rest of this as I have time!
| Fenris Jin chapter 24 . 9/10
I think my most favorite in this story is the Snape and McGonagall camaraderie.. It's so much fun whenever they accuse each other of Gryffindor or Slytherin acts.. XD
So far, Minerva is in the lead, but I think Severus gives her grief by also indulging Gryffindorish traits that even annoy the Head of the House of Lions. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 9/10
That was very decent of the rest of the staff. To feel put off for the rug being pulled under the snakes. It was nice to hear they can see the unfairness of it after all.
| Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 9/10
Looks like Snape's wards are going to be getting on fine.. xD
Quidditch-wise, I think I agree with Draco. He'd be better off as a Chaser, mostly for the sake of their building friendship, but also for show of the fact that Malfoy is no longer interested in competing with Harry due to personal vendetta. Better just enjoy playing Quidditch instead of stoking up unnecessary comparison between House Seekers. Draco himself put himself forward as a Chaser, so I don't think he'd be overly concerned not to be a Seeker.
| Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 9/10
Having Snape see only himself in the Mirror of Erised at first was actually quite gratifying. It shows that he's actually, if not better, a wiser man. Not anymore living in regret and lost dreams. The bit with a mirror Harry was heart warming though.. and it shows hope for better future for them both. :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 9/10
I certainly think there's merit with how the Twins defend Snape.. With all their success in their pranks with the use of potions.. It actually explains a great number of things.. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 9/10
Snow wars with Severus and Minerva.. I really do wonder how that came to be.. xD
The Head of the House of Lions should have known.. even after nine years of conceded defeat, one way or another, the House of Snakes will be able to strike back! XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 9/10
Well, that escalated quickly.. XD
It's really just too bad that Harry hadn't realized what set Snape off on him. The reason his Potions Master saw him an ungrateful brat.. Really, the man can hold a grudge, even subconsciously. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 9/10
Harry seems to lack some appreciation for Snape's efforts for him.. With Severus cultivating Draco, and the dear blond, obviously grateful for his uncle, I wouldn't object seeing Potter be a little green with envy for such bond among the snakes. They're actually really cute as godfather and cheeky godson.. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 9/10
This is adorable! XD
I love it when Severus and Minerva have their own thing. Especially a playful rivalry between them. xD
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 9 . 8/5
Probably my favorite fanfiction in a long time, the characters are great! Not OOC at all.
| my deathly hallows chapter 4 . 7/17
I totally loved the idea of the trolls POV, at first I was a little confused though, but then I got it and thought it was bloody brilliant. Way to think outside the box
| RedRustlingLeaves chapter 7 . 7/1
"Irritating child"- that you will come to *cough* care*cough* for.
| thosetooweaktoseekit chapter 20 . 6/28
I loved this part, really I did. I liked how accurately you captured Severus' style.
"His reflection stared coldly back- harshly accurate...unflattering...alone. 'A contented man,' Severus snorted to himself."
I wish you would continue with the sequel, but I completely understand if you don't. I mean, you probably have a legit life to deal with. Though, even if you don't write more with fanfiction, I hope you don't give up writing. You have a good style!
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/26