|Reviews for Equilibrium|
| NekoTaku24433 chapter 21 . 1/6
"Kindly do not do it againfavorite line this chapter
| NekoTaku24433 chapter 14 . 1/6
I love the camaraderie Severus and Minerva share; the snowball tradition was a unique and adorable touch
| NekoTaku24433 chapter 12 . 1/6
I love how Snape stating Harry's work to be "acceptable" is equated in his mind to "handing out compliments"
| NekoTaku24433 chapter 4 . 1/6
I loved the initial portion from the troll's perspective; well done
| NekoTaku24433 chapter 2 . 1/6
This fic is so good I'm actually rereading it! One note though-James Potter was a Chaser, not a Seeker
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2015
I hope Severus Snape understands that young harry potter is not his father they need each other not against each other.
| Amanthya chapter 17 . 9/14/2015
No, no, Severus; he's going to get him killed just after he goes through puberty.
I've had to work with people who are unreasonable like Dumbles - the kind that get you mad then patronize you for being upset, who throw you under the bus then act like it was for your own good - look how much stronger you are now! you wouldn't be if I hadn't tossed you under the lorry!
It can drive you mad.
I enjoyed the snowball fight, and especially Severus's line " why thank you, Minerva, flattery is unnecessary, however" or something to that effect. It was very true-to-character.
Glad he manned up and apologized to Harry, poor kid. And that he's learned how to properly speak to him when the boy does something stupidly heroic - emphasis on stupid.
I look forward to reading the rest of this as I have time!
| Fenris Jin chapter 24 . 9/10/2015
I think my most favorite in this story is the Snape and McGonagall camaraderie.. It's so much fun whenever they accuse each other of Gryffindor or Slytherin acts.. XD
So far, Minerva is in the lead, but I think Severus gives her grief by also indulging Gryffindorish traits that even annoy the Head of the House of Lions. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 9/10/2015
That was very decent of the rest of the staff. To feel put off for the rug being pulled under the snakes. It was nice to hear they can see the unfairness of it after all.
| Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 9/10/2015
Looks like Snape's wards are going to be getting on fine.. xD
Quidditch-wise, I think I agree with Draco. He'd be better off as a Chaser, mostly for the sake of their building friendship, but also for show of the fact that Malfoy is no longer interested in competing with Harry due to personal vendetta. Better just enjoy playing Quidditch instead of stoking up unnecessary comparison between House Seekers. Draco himself put himself forward as a Chaser, so I don't think he'd be overly concerned not to be a Seeker.
| Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 9/10/2015
Having Snape see only himself in the Mirror of Erised at first was actually quite gratifying. It shows that he's actually, if not better, a wiser man. Not anymore living in regret and lost dreams. The bit with a mirror Harry was heart warming though.. and it shows hope for better future for them both. :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 9/10/2015
I certainly think there's merit with how the Twins defend Snape.. With all their success in their pranks with the use of potions.. It actually explains a great number of things.. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 9/10/2015
Snow wars with Severus and Minerva.. I really do wonder how that came to be.. xD
The Head of the House of Lions should have known.. even after nine years of conceded defeat, one way or another, the House of Snakes will be able to strike back! XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 9/10/2015
Well, that escalated quickly.. XD
It's really just too bad that Harry hadn't realized what set Snape off on him. The reason his Potions Master saw him an ungrateful brat.. Really, the man can hold a grudge, even subconsciously. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 9/10/2015
Harry seems to lack some appreciation for Snape's efforts for him.. With Severus cultivating Draco, and the dear blond, obviously grateful for his uncle, I wouldn't object seeing Potter be a little green with envy for such bond among the snakes. They're actually really cute as godfather and cheeky godson.. xD