Reviews for Equilibrium
Fenris Jin chapter 23 . 9/10/2015
That was very decent of the rest of the staff. To feel put off for the rug being pulled under the snakes. It was nice to hear they can see the unfairness of it after all.
Fenris Jin chapter 22 . 9/10/2015
Looks like Snape's wards are going to be getting on fine.. xD

Quidditch-wise, I think I agree with Draco. He'd be better off as a Chaser, mostly for the sake of their building friendship, but also for show of the fact that Malfoy is no longer interested in competing with Harry due to personal vendetta. Better just enjoy playing Quidditch instead of stoking up unnecessary comparison between House Seekers. Draco himself put himself forward as a Chaser, so I don't think he'd be overly concerned not to be a Seeker.
Fenris Jin chapter 20 . 9/10/2015
Having Snape see only himself in the Mirror of Erised at first was actually quite gratifying. It shows that he's actually, if not better, a wiser man. Not anymore living in regret and lost dreams. The bit with a mirror Harry was heart warming though.. and it shows hope for better future for them both. :)
Fenris Jin chapter 15 . 9/10/2015
I certainly think there's merit with how the Twins defend Snape.. With all their success in their pranks with the use of potions.. It actually explains a great number of things.. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 14 . 9/10/2015
Snow wars with Severus and Minerva.. I really do wonder how that came to be.. xD

The Head of the House of Lions should have known.. even after nine years of conceded defeat, one way or another, the House of Snakes will be able to strike back! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 9/10/2015
Well, that escalated quickly.. XD

It's really just too bad that Harry hadn't realized what set Snape off on him. The reason his Potions Master saw him an ungrateful brat.. Really, the man can hold a grudge, even subconsciously. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 9/10/2015
Harry seems to lack some appreciation for Snape's efforts for him.. With Severus cultivating Draco, and the dear blond, obviously grateful for his uncle, I wouldn't object seeing Potter be a little green with envy for such bond among the snakes. They're actually really cute as godfather and cheeky godson.. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 9/10/2015
This is adorable! XD

I love it when Severus and Minerva have their own thing. Especially a playful rivalry between them. xD
abandonedaccount47 chapter 9 . 8/5/2015
Probably my favorite fanfiction in a long time, the characters are great! Not OOC at all.
my deathly hallows chapter 4 . 7/17/2015
I totally loved the idea of the trolls POV, at first I was a little confused though, but then I got it and thought it was bloody brilliant. Way to think outside the box
Mean Little Lemon chapter 7 . 7/1/2015
"Irritating child"- that you will come to *cough* care*cough* for.
TaraRhyme chapter 20 . 6/28/2015
I loved this part, really I did. I liked how accurately you captured Severus' style.
"His reflection stared coldly back- harshly accurate...unflattering...alone. 'A contented man,' Severus snorted to himself."
I wish you would continue with the sequel, but I completely understand if you don't. I mean, you probably have a legit life to deal with. Though, even if you don't write more with fanfiction, I hope you don't give up writing. You have a good style!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/26/2015
Brilliant!
Ani Mei chapter 23 . 6/18/2015
Oh, I also have to add that I'm very intrigued. Its seems like the majority of the faculty have some kind of charm placed over them. Harry soon or maybe he's embarrassed to admit his conditions? But Poppy's reaction is very curious.
Kudos to the development and the tantalizing hints you leave throughout that hints at something bigger and ominous at play.
Ani Mei chapter 24 . 6/18/2015
This is one of my favorite mentor Snape fic so far. I love the way you keep canon events and dialogue but add another layer of meaning to it. I think I'll look at the canon with new eyes should I revisit soon. The development of the relationship between Snape and Harry is so well paced and believable.
I like how this has Snape as the main focus, it's very refreshing to see an adult perspective. I also adore the working relationship between the teachers. It's believable and sweet and I love the reaction to the end of the year feast. I never quite read it that way.
I'm excited to see how their relationship will flourish and to see a nicer Draco.
This fic/series is incredible, I hope you return to continue soon.
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