Hell yeah, I would like to see more! What an amazing story! And very original I must say- I love it!

I loved it. I was confused for a while since your summary said JarethXOC but this was genius! I would love you to write more.

Beautifully done. I loved this so much!

Quite a unique little tale, isn't it? I very much so enjoyed it, although I was sorry it did not go on longer. You must continue!

You see, when I first began reading this, I thought the guy was going to be Jareth.

All I was thinking was 'Great, another JarethxOC'

BUT!

No, it was not Jareth, but Toby.

I loved that.

When I first realized it was Toby, I gasped.

Literally, I was like ' .Gawd! No way.'

Great story, I loved it.

And I'd LOVE to see more of Donna and Goblin Toby

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