|Reviews for Where it all Began|
| kablay chapter 2 . 11/8/2006
I really liked it! It was great! You shouldn't put yourself down, the more you write the better you'll get. My writing stlye is similar to yours, and I have only 1 story, too. This was really good, and I hope you keep writing!
| Sydney Grise chapter 2 . 11/8/2006
Just keep going. You're doing fine. Anyways, just remember how your story should go. I'll read it again soon if you improved. Did I mention it was worthwhile reading it? - Hope to read the next soon...
| DaemonicKitten chapter 1 . 11/2/2006
This is a really awesome story so far. I love the first chapter. I really hope you'll update soon.
As far as I saw, there were no spelling mistakes and it was cool to read about Lenne watching Shuyin.
Anyways, keep up the great work! _