|Reviews for Crushed|
| Chistery chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Oh, I just love the idea of Spike bashing the bartender's head into the juke-box repeatedly. It's just so... Spike-ish!
One suggestion, though. The scene with Spike and the woman was a bit confusing, because it was all dialouge. You might want to add a bit more narration. But, it is your story!
Lovely job, duck!
| kbk chapter 1 . 10/1/2002
That rocked. Admittedly, I do like Spike in any incarnation, but some days... mmm, evil. Plus, this would have saved us a whole lot of angst later on. The dialogue works well, the visual of him walking out at the end... yeah. Cool.
| Lain chapter 1 . 6/23/2001
hey! that was pretty good! I liked it