|Reviews for Living A Life Foretold|
| Xiaou Nem chapter 12 . 2/15
Awwww... Premonitions in real life are probably very hard to have. Your depiction of Ryo's life seems very realistic in that regard. The poor guy.
I like the ongoing politics in your fiction - I'm really interested to see how this plays out in the establishment of Crystal Tokyo. And some of the bad guys have a very technological/ scientific theme. Maybe it is a part of the set up for the magical future of Crystal Tokyo? And sooner or later, their identities will be public knowledge. All the cars in this story... And what about CCTV? I'm staying tuned in to this!
| Xiaou Nem chapter 9 . 2/15
The mad scientist!
Loved the scene between Rei and her father. Maturity, love and redemption will be theirs! ... Eventually?
And the babysitter & movies discussion from the other chapter reminds me of a similar scene in Jendra's Sailor Moon Universal. No plagiarism or anything, just an interesting coincidence.
| Xiaou Nem chapter 7 . 2/15
A bit funny, but, why torture? So much power in the hands of youths...
| Xiaou Nem chapter 6 . 2/15
Awww... Minako.. Why do you have to blow it this way?
| Xiaou Nem chapter 4 . 2/15
So I guess Artemis didn't explain then...
| Xiaou Nem chapter 3 . 2/15
It's quite dangerous if the sailor senshi seem to be supporting terrorists... But I know Usagi didn't think about that. To even out the odds, she should probably help Arashi as well... Well, I'll just get on with the reading to see how this pans out...
| Xiaou Nem chapter 2 . 2/15
Mobile suit gundam ... Uh... Sailor wing!
I think I'm going to like this story!
| JHo chapter 4 . 9/28/2010
Great work! Just a minor nitpick, you don't graduate summa cum laude from Oxford, you graduate with first class British don't use the Latin honours system. Of course, this doesn't detract in any way from the rest of the story, so keep up the wonderful writing!
| Ummster chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
| Vld chapter 12 . 9/13/2008
Wow. Just... WOW! You're a genius! A real genius! Just for that, I'm gonna read some of your other stories right now!
I would try to make a better review... but I would inwardly fail. I mean, the only thing I can really comment about is you using Usagi as the damsel in distress. Everything else I would simplify a little too much, which I think would be insulting to you.
So I'll put it to the easiest way I can put it. You're joining my favs.
| Vld chapter 3 . 9/12/2008
Who said acting stupid wasn't productive? GO USAGI! She actually risked her own health, not to mention being discovered to help a friend.
As for Ami... well, she knoews Usagi, after all... yet she didn't expect her to act this recklessly? I'll say, she probably will think Usagi was immature for doing it... well, I think maturity comes in different forms. In Usagi it didn't show in becoming more adult (that wouldn't be Usagi if she did), but in how even more selfless she's become. At the beginning she always needed someone to push her to fight instead of running away... now I think she doesn't need this push... she probably still acts all clumsy, and cries a lot but... can't have everything, hey?
| evaya chapter 12 . 1/10/2007
def. makes me wanna cry now! done amazingly as always! ]
| Andi chapter 12 . 1/8/2007
Oh...this is so excellent!
| etj4Eagle chapter 12 . 1/6/2007
Good story and a very beautiful and well done ending. The little bit with the lady that Ryo had saved her daughter, Ami, was a very touching point to end the story on.
| Ismail Saeed chapter 12 . 1/6/2007
I believe this is the first time I've put a review on one of your stories, though I love them.
However, there was an important thread in chapters 10 or 11 that you left hanging... the press got a look at which car Tuxedo Kamen came out of. And the other Senshi. Also, Usagi was untransformed in the mobile armor, and maybe people saw that...
I'll grant you that maybe the Outers wouldn't go to the funeral...