Reviews for The Shower
Gate to Dreams chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
funny...yet GREAT!
candybkins chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
0_0 that was unbelievably hot you should sooo continue it
Cleonhart chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Ahhhhhh xD

Brilliant. 3
ArtistAtPlay chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Awsome story. Really awsome. And I'm a picky reader too.

I just wanted to mention that I think it would be awsome if we could get this in Cloud's POV too, from "start to finish". That would be so amazing.
Chomps the Insane chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
That's it. You're my favorite author on FF.
Stellar Eclipse chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
You know, I really have no idea why it's taken me this long to flail at you about how much I adore this fic. I end up stumbling across it every once in a while and it still gives me the best kind of shivers. I don't know if you'd ever consider doing more with this pairing, but you write them incredibly well and I think you would make a lot of fans very, very happy. XD
Icommentyouwrite chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
*glomp* this fic was one of the better smut fics ive ever read :D

ive read it before... its just... you know when you read a favorite fic, you wanna read it again the next chance you get? :D well yup!
Little Pearl chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Man, Cloud is fast to recover...

Wonderful smut again
dragunzahurr chapter 1 . 5/10/2008

oh my god, hot hot hot hot hot hot hotx89865748.

i love you bah.

i can never find a good enough cloudxleon masturbating fic.

but this was AWESOMEE~E.

Sticksinabox chapter 1 . 9/8/2007
O, that was hot. The end for some reason I sound quite funny. I would like to see more. ( Anyways, good job!
Cold Drake Queen chapter 1 . 8/13/2007
hum ... clean and yet not so much. Too bad we didn't get to see what happened in the shower after.
Tekko chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Oh-hoho, that was sinfully delicious~
senku chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
very nice. Me liked it.
NilanTiff chapter 1 . 1/23/2007

That was SEXAY! Like, WOAH! I wish there was a sequeal to this... *_~
Sepia chapter 1 . 12/25/2006
That is an excellent story...I also read your other one (The Bike Ride), and since I am too lazy to review both right now, I can tell you that you have an unmistakeable talent.

Keep writing!
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