|Reviews for the dark awakening|
| No One chapter 36 . 9/14
Still waiting for another chapter...
| Dark-angle20123 chapter 1 . 8/31
Worst story EVER !
What the heck is wrong with you ? You moron stupid SOB ! stop writing you usless excuse of a writter
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Your grammar sucks and you have no clue how to spell
| wolfbane chapter 14 . 6/25
i am new too your story and only finished up to chapter 14 and i have to say so far brilliant especially that "jedi mind trick" as you called it, i was rolling with laughter.
| prototype10987 chapter 36 . 6/15
its great and all but the major question is are you going to tell when and how the girls become half demons
| pikachucat chapter 36 . 5/31
| CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 5/30
Well I'm done with this shit because clearly it's more Kishimoto loving garbage where he forgives those slimes for everything despite not deserving and instead deserving a brutal death.
Kishimoto cock sucking little fuckers.
| VFSNAKE chapter 36 . 5/30
YAY! It took a long time, but it was worth it.
| Reon-D-Anibis chapter 36 . 5/30
Thank you for updating this story! I've been looking for it for several months. I hope to read more in the future! Good luck my fellow author!
| No body chapter 1 . 3/28
Nice just nice
| Master Xehanort chapter 35 . 3/24
I love it this is great my friend.
| garra'ssand246 chapter 35 . 2/28
You should get sukara ( I think I spelled that correctly) to go with kimiarou
| pikachucat chapter 35 . 12/23/2014
awesome more please
| True Guardian Angel chapter 13 . 10/26/2014
| ajm35 chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
UZUMAKI FAN CLUB TAYUYA AND HER FOUL MOUTH I LOVE IT