Reviews for the dark awakening
Dark-angle20123 chapter 1 . 8/31
Worst story EVER !
What the heck is wrong with you ? You moron stupid SOB ! stop writing you usless excuse of a writter
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Your grammar sucks and you have no clue how to spell
wolfbane chapter 14 . 6/25
i am new too your story and only finished up to chapter 14 and i have to say so far brilliant especially that "jedi mind trick" as you called it, i was rolling with laughter.
prototype10987 chapter 36 . 6/15
its great and all but the major question is are you going to tell when and how the girls become half demons
pikachucat chapter 36 . 5/31
awesome
Dark Inari Of The Fist chapter 1 . 5/30
Well I'm done with this shit because clearly it's more Kishimoto loving garbage where he forgives those slimes for everything despite not deserving and instead deserving a brutal death.

Kishimoto cock sucking little fuckers.
VFSNAKE chapter 36 . 5/30
YAY! It took a long time, but it was worth it.
Reon-D-Anibis chapter 36 . 5/30
Thank you for updating this story! I've been looking for it for several months. I hope to read more in the future! Good luck my fellow author!
No body chapter 1 . 3/28
Nice just nice
Master Xehanort chapter 35 . 3/24
I love it this is great my friend.
garra'ssand246 chapter 35 . 2/28
You should get sukara ( I think I spelled that correctly) to go with kimiarou
pikachucat chapter 35 . 12/23/2014
awesome more please
True Guardian Angel chapter 13 . 10/26/2014
tenten
ajm35 chapter 7 . 4/28/2014
UZUMAKI FAN CLUB TAYUYA AND HER FOUL MOUTH I LOVE IT
jmancometh777 chapter 35 . 4/1/2014
This story is awesome! However I would like to know are you abandoning this story or not? If so could you let us know... Otherwise plz post the next chapter soon.
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