Reviews for Raven's feelings
Goth Albino Angel chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Aw, poor Raven. D: you totally killed this. It was wicked.
Thecrazyrabidfangirl chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
The idea was nice, it pulled off romantic feelings without blatantly going out of Raven's character (though keeping Raven in-character in a romance story is nearly impossible, so it's completely forgivable).

It wasn't really angsty enough to deserve an Angst/Romance rating, maybe Romance/Angst at best.

There were numerous small grammatical and form errors, nothing that's too bad. The one big error that makes it slightly awkward to read is how you would say "She" and THEN "Raven" proper form is to have the girl's name first and then start referring to her as "Her" or "She" otherwise it makes the reader feel subtly uncomfortable reading it.

In conclusion: overall OK story, the romance element was pulled off well, but needs improvement on the form and grammar.

Rabbidfangirl
The Original GGRain chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
really good but sad...
bellecatastrophe chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
That Was Just... Perfect.

The Title Is Practically A Misnomer [No Offence, But It Isn't The Most Eye-Catching In The World] - The Way You Captured Raven's Personality And Tied Your Story In With What Happens In The Show Is Perfect.

*Faves*
Billy Rose chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
oh!

poor raven!

too bad Star hasn't given it a thought... *sigh*

great fic _
Prince V chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
gives bitter-sweet a new meaning...nice job

Apathy is Death

Prince V
Korey chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Aw... Raven is strong; I would've told her.
2stupid4you3 chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
AW! POOR RAVEY! Raven needsa hug! she should step out!.. I did and.. well.. heheh.. iv never talked or seen her again but HEY its better to love then to have never loved! right? -groan-
Raelex chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
a really interesting story, but i have to desagree in some point of view...
clarissa chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
aw por rave i love rave and seeing her like that is sad... hmm love is hard
BioDragon chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
So sad. TT
Thorn on a Rose chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Very sad. but I really enjoyed reading it Bittersweet and short!

Some grammer mistakes but all in all Very well Done!

ToaR
burnettchic8 chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
great story . make more. unusual plot, but well worth the read.
artemisgirl chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
Beautiful story. I love the depth of the emotion in it.

The world needs more shoujo-ai. Yours is wonderful. Very, very well done.