|Reviews for Brothers|
| Robyn S. Mockingbird chapter 11 . 6/14
OH wow this was fast paced. Good, but with the constant sense that I just had to go faster, move faster, read faster because I had to know what happened next. Frank's tendency to just kind of fall apart given the lack of his brother is something I probably shouldn't enjoy as much as I do, but wow do I.
| Robyn S. Mockingbird chapter 7 . 6/14
Chet's amazing, I'm so glad he's here while Frank's breaking down, and oh my god I can barely stand to pause and review, because the next chapter calls so sweetly
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/10
It's Callie, not Cally. Great story, by the way. You really capture all the right emotions.
| midknightmist chapter 11 . 2/20/2013
Poor Joe, you whumped him good this time. Thanks for sharing.
| KayValo87 chapter 11 . 7/16/2012
That was a perfect ending. (Especially the last paragraph.)
I must saw I loved the conversation at the end and the chapter titles were great.\
I look forward to reading more of your work.
| KayValo87 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
The point of the opening chapter is to hook the reader. Not sure you could have done better with this. :)
Great start, and I love the way it started so innocently.
| Bella chapter 11 . 12/21/2009
I really liked the story!
| Wyntirsno chapter 11 . 10/14/2009
That was a great story, very good. I was glad you decided to let Joe live, the brothers are so very close. You are really good at this kind of story, very suspenseful.
| LOLA chapter 11 . 3/10/2009
GREAT! if i said this before srry! but stil...
| beachchick4 chapter 11 . 3/5/2009
YAY! happy ending! great story!
| coli narago chapter 10 . 2/16/2009
yikes. did frank just freak. that was un called for. whatever. next chapter please!
| coli narago chapter 5 . 2/16/2009
Oh my god! A scream? This is un-caled-for! I need to know more! Why did he scream? Did he see joe? dying and mangled? Oh dear god let him be alive.
| coli narago chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
Hey, it's me again! Though i still loved the ending, it wasn't quite as large of a cliffhanger. therefore, this will be a longer review. I loved it. you really had my heart racing when you said that the bloods was all Joe's. I wanted to read the ret of the chapter so badly,that i swear my eyes were popping out of my head. my big brother,Mike, looked at me like i was a looney and my oldest brother, paul, just started laughing. I dumped the rest of my coke on him. he wasn't happy.
Anyway, an overall very good chapter.i love it.
| coli narago chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Oh my god! wonderful! i would wright a longer review, but i just need to get onto the next chapter!
| Emma C chapter 3 . 9/20/2008
Why is it always Joe? I mean, serously, of all the stories i've read, there all about Joe being kidnapped. Maybe i'm just reading the wrong stories. Ah well, this one is great anyway! I mean, if you think about it, the people who write the Hardy Boys should take a look at this site. They would probably get heaps of ideas for stories! not that i'm getting bored of the original Hardy Boys series, except these are so much cooler!