|Reviews for Sun Down|
| Traditional.Rose chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Sha-wing. I have been looking for a story like this. Just the thing to make me feel better. So gonna dig into this now xx
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 15 . 2/3/2010
Really nice story. Liked your characters. Like the plot and storyline you developed and told. Look forward to reading more.
| xFeathersxx chapter 16 . 6/20/2009
I know this story is like 2 years old but I figured you would apperciate a comment anyway.
1: Damn, rated T. ;D That was still some pretty hot Teen-rated action, though. Go you for cutting out unnecessary smut. :D
2. This story was just so awesome, though the whole running away thing still confuses me; maybe I'm just reading too far into things. Charlie made her make a choice, so she did, and they left because Charlie would try to find his baby girl again, right?
3. All that beingsaid, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and I can't wait to read your other fics.
4. You really should become an author; you have a fantastic writing style and your plotlines are always unique and interesting. But I know what you're saying; I love to write too but it doesn't seem like a steady career, and I have other interests too. I can't see it as my future, but more as a part of my future. But keep writing anyway if you love it!
| xFeathersxx chapter 8 . 6/20/2009
So, I just want to stop here and say... Am I missing something?
Its been, what, 8 chapters now? When Bella and Edward ran away, was it just because Charlie was forbidding Bella to spend time with Edward, or was it because of something more? I know Victoria is an issue but Bella didn't until multiple chapters in, and they had already decided to flee. Flee from what? Why would Charlie track them down? And why are the Cullens splitting up?
| Estel la Rodeuse chapter 15 . 3/23/2009
I had fun reading your story...
It's well written. I don't have much to say though... I just wanted to let you know that I read your story and liked it!
and I love your penname eventhough I don't get the whole thing as I haven't watched Buffy (ever!)
| ttgirl chapter 11 . 2/15/2009
i luv this chapter its awesome i luv when bella said yes to marring edward its awesome
| ttgirl chapter 10 . 2/15/2009
luv this chapter. i only like the love scene
| ttgirl chapter 4 . 2/15/2009
| amyybri chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I really loved it. Please hurry anr wirte more!
| amyybri chapter 16 . 10/19/2008
I really liked it! But I have a question, how can Bella blush if she's a vampire?
| marinasensei chapter 16 . 4/17/2008
o.k... i will wait but i love this series! you wrote it soo well!1 i hope you keep writing it! if you need help i will try!k!
| LeighK81 chapter 16 . 1/26/2008
1. Your story completely captivated me.
2. You did a good (or is it well?) job with keeping the characters in character.
I have one note though:
I'm not sure if Edward would be able to survive on 'dead' blood. Stephenie said in the P.C.s over at the Lexicon that being around Bella when she was on her period wasn't that bad, because that blood doesn't appeal to him since it's dead. I always thought he did "living" blood to get the life his body craves. I could be wrong though, because animal blood doesn't appeal to vampires either, but they can survive on it.
I'll begin the sequel to this story tomorrow.
| barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
i am really lookin to finish reading this story
| Cullenista chapter 9 . 12/27/2007
You are a frickin' genius. Evidence: '... he could of moved us to a wet cardboard box and I would have been fine with it.' Truer words were never written, and they're funny, too. Made me laugh.
| Golden Fantasies chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
hehe. Plotty fluff. :)