Rk

Good nice

I loved the beginning of the story where you portrayed chloe, clark and lois as a family. Wonderful happy moments. So beautifully written.

Oh my God! This has to be one of the best Smallville fanfics I have read. I can relate to Chloe a lot, unfortunately.

But this was amazing. I teared up at the end a little.

Just simply .Zing. If you don't mind I would like to share this in a fanfic group on Facebook? If not just let me know and I won't.

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i wish chloe could have a happy ending this was sad but good-

ooh my god there is no words to explain how sad that is is too sad!, she never had the chance is so sad! im crying, reading this kind of fic increace my hate towards the big dumb alien and cry for chloe she always so broken

Oh the last line broke my heart ;C

great story.

That was one of the saddest things I've ever read in my entire life. My heart ached at that.

Very well written and interesting twist.

My God this had me in tears! I SHOULD BE DOING HOMEWORK!

Strange, I don't see Clark crossing that line with Chloe like that. Even in this day and age of "friends with benefits" and all the other junk in society, I think Clark would not slept with a girl unless he was truly in love with her. Then again, I'm from the school of thought that says you don't sleep with someone until you're married. The interaction with Lois was strange (much as it was this past season). Anyhow, the method of breaking the story to advance time was a nice touch. I just have a hard time relating Smallville to eventually becoming like the Superman films/series from the past.

I've read this a long time ago, and it took me FOREVER to find this again. So I re-read it with some sad music in my PJs and in the end, I realized I was crying. I didn't see the last part coming (the first time I read this).

Damn.

That was good.

You had me all happythem made my little Chlarker heart cry - same on you! lol

Oh my God, that was like, so sad I actually cried (I don't know if it was because of the story or because the music I was listening to, maybe it was a mix of both. Carrie Underwood has a lot of songs that make me very, very emotional).

As usual, I hate canon. Not one thing I like to read/watch ends up the way I would want to. I'm cursed, right?

Anyways, beautifully written. Painfully excellent. Another story that goes to my Favorite List.

What an awesome story. I really liked it!