Reviews for One, Two, and Three
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Ah gees. Sad now. Beautifully written. :,)
102hinobi chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
that is a very sad very sad in deed
Balenciaga chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
I still miss Asuma and it's been what, 6 years? :(
naash chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
amazing last words
vapanalley chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
The end ate my soul. At a lost for words. :)
Silent Sage chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
This was an amazing story. Their interactions were so honest, this scene could probably be canon. Ino-Shika-Chou interaction is definitely one of my favorite interactions in the manga and you definitely made me remember why.
ShikaIno1 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I love your story so much!
twiinklestar chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Aw, that's so sad. I haven't actually gotten to the part where Asuma-sensei dies but I've read about it a lot and it seems REALLY sad. I'll probably bawl my eyes out. Poor team ten. I feel so bad. I really like this story. You definitely wrote it well. Great job!
JaliceLove chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I tilted my head and squinted... REALLY HARD.

and I saw it :] a bit...
Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Shikamaru, you insolent git. That was the one line going through my head after what happened, and although he's a git at that point he's still a lovely git. :)

Nice work.
Lockets and Beads chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
very sad
Jenny chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
hello heartbreak chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
Very beautifully done.
HJWG chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
very good
NocturnalFerri chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
*squints* i can kinda see some shika/ino in there. I kinda suspected it, tho i didnt read the mention of it at the top until after reading the fic through. *shrug* anyway, I really liked the fic. I think you did asuma proud. :-) *sniffle*
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