Reviews for To Christine
Jolly Grasshopper chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Wow. Just, wow. It's so sad, and it sounds very...Erik. (lol) I love it! Good job!
LisalikesPhantom chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
aw i like it '(

and i can actually picture Erik playing the electric guitar!

oh he'd be so god...*drools*...*sigh*, anyway, good poem/rock song! There's one thing though, not about this work, but your profile..."He would murder Christine, and murder for her." The second part is very true, but I do not think that he would EVER murder Christine. After all, he did love her deeply. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Phemale chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Hehehehe... Before I read the bit at the beginning about this being a "mellow acoustic/electric guitar rock ballad", I had this picture in my mind of Jack Black from School of Rock singing this with strobe lights and all that good stuff...

But anyway, quite poetic. Bravi.
phantom-jedi1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Sweet and sad. If you broke it up into a verse format, it would be easier to set to music. While the (emotion here) was slightly annoying, it is needed as this is meant to be sung, or at least spoken. A good job: if it ever is set to music it would be quite interesting.

phantom_jedi
LittleLottexoxEriksTrueAngel chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
that was beautiful...great job