|Reviews for Saving your life|
| Uyen chapter 35 . 3/31/2016
I wonder who it is. Is it his father? (Trying to be vague to not give away spoilers is hard) I wonder if he's going to be on her side now bc she talked about a subject that was meaningful to him.
| Uyen chapter 34 . 3/31/2016
This is why keeping secrets...will only bite them in the booty
| Uyen chapter 33 . 3/31/2016
Omg Malfoy! I know this is a snamione ff, but my ship is large and full of people..I can't believe I got to see both of my ships in here.
| gigglymonkey12 chapter 20 . 3/31/2016
While I like seeing both POV I find it sometime hard to discern what is happening and where in the plot we are at. Sometimes reading the entire previous chapter in another POV is not the appealing...
| gigglymonkey12 chapter 18 . 3/31/2016
So he basically imagined the whole thing?
| gigglymonkey12 chapter 13 . 3/31/2016
I hope their plan works out well.
| gigglymonkey12 chapter 7 . 3/31/2016
I'm glad the Ron in this story has a clear head instead of being hot tempered.
| twinningbigtime chapter 65 . 3/27/2016
I can't believe The negative reviews!
That was fabulous :) I don't know how I missed this on my last snapione hunt, but I'm glad I found it now! If anyone deserved a happy ending (teehee) it was him
| Bluewolf80 chapter 65 . 3/10/2016
This was recommended to me by TWO different people! I can definetly see why. It was an amazing adventure that I was sad to see come to an end.
My thoughts: Although I loved this fix, I was not fond of Hermione. I felt she lacked the strength of her CC, was whiny, angered easily, pushed her friends away, put her herself in danger recklessly and although she read a lot she didn't research anything anything except the memory loss.
I super enjoyed Severus' character and I thought you did him well. I was wondering if you had written out the whole Lily thing until it came up at the very end. I guess he left those memories out since he never wanted anyone to know. He seems likes a sexy bastard too. Whew, that voice!
Which brings me to your sex scences. They were numerous! Not a bad thing! I thought they were good. Def hot. Maybe a tad monotonous at times. For example, I know Severus has awesome hands but you write him fingering her in every scene I think. Have him go down on her more or such her breasts. Plus, did Hermione ever give him a blow job? Hmmm, that would've been hot.
The battle scene was terrific! Really great. I enjoyed reading that the same as I did The Battle of Hogwarts. I was transported to that forest. I could hear the fighting, feel the fire from the dragons circling above, smell the ozone from spells being cast and magic everywhere. It was exiting and action-packed. Truly very good. I would just recommend some type of break-line like a solid line, asterisks, dots, whatever to deferentiate when you switch between what is going on with one character to what is going on with another. It can get a bit confusing at times to be engrossed in something that is going on with Hermione then suddenly be in Draco's story in the next paragraph.
I also thought that Harry was a bit OC since he go mad at Hermione and didn't believe her. I know he also defended her but I can't imagine Harry for a minute believing anything bad about her.
So that's all I've got. It really was a wonderful piece. I'm going to stalk you to see what else ya got now!
| Cecil Pierce chapter 64 . 3/4/2016
im crying dude
| Mel Fonseca chapter 65 . 2/21/2016
Omg. I loved it so much. This fanfiction put me through so many emotions... Really, I've never felt this empathy for a fic before. Well done. Its well written and for sure became one of my favourite ss/hg of ALL times. It should be cannon! 3 This story touched my heart on a spiritual level. I am brazilian and most of my friends don't read/speak english... It was a torture having NO ONE to talk about this wonderful story... Someone to share all those feelings (god knows you gave me A LOT OF THOSE)
I really LOVED
can't wait to read more from you. Hope you still write Severus and Hermione fics
thank you for this beautiful story!
| Guest chapter 63 . 2/21/2016
OMG. Hermione why are you wearing Heels on a battle in a forest WOMAN
| Guest chapter 59 . 2/20/2016
I swear to god... If one of them die on this battle, I'll lose my shit. If one of them die... I hope you kill the other as well so they can live happily ever after at the beyond. Otherwise my life will turn into a massive black hopeless whole, if anyone of them suffer from the lost. Omg, tell me neither of them will die... Kill EVERYONE else, but not the 2 of them. Omg, i'm so afraid of clicking "next"
too many feels.
| Guest chapter 56 . 2/20/2016
if hermione is still doubting severus after EVERYTHING he did to help her, she truly doesn't deserver him.
| Guest chapter 50 . 2/20/2016
Just get married already !