|Reviews for The Kokiri Warrior|
| Thawn716 chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
Thank you for the acknowledgment. I really need to start work on my own story and I think I will be getting out 1 or 2 chapters over the Easter break since I will have no school work to worry about (scholarships require way to much effort btw).
| Thawn716 chapter 10 . 3/27/2007
Yes I would love a PM. Though the ending surprised me quite a bit.
| TheFireSage chapter 10 . 3/26/2007
omg i cannot believe that's the end! it's so sad! i really hope you make a sequal b/c that would OWN!
| Thawn716 chapter 9 . 3/26/2007
Nice chapter and it wasn't as jumpy as the last chapter was (the last chapter wasn't bad but the fight scene was hard to understand in some spots)
| TheFireSage chapter 9 . 3/21/2007
o mystery person! oh noes! i can't believe savannah killed paris' brother, but he still loves her. aw!
| Thawn716 chapter 8 . 3/4/2007
Nice chapter. But Merlin is bugging me, though mainly from the name itself. Nevermind though, I find it rational at least that when told to retreat some of them argued. Once again this system of altering didn't work I have now missed four different alerts for chapters.
| Thawn716 chapter 7 . 2/25/2007
The reference to link was strange and confused me for a moment but never mind that. A well written chapter and I look forward to the next.
| Thawn716 chapter 6 . 2/19/2007
Nice chapter and I can't wait till the next one. I'm glad that you didn't have him getting in and out unnoticed as that would be highly unlikely.
| ZombieDragon chapter 5 . 1/31/2007
oh... i like it. Is Link in this story by chance? Or am I missing something here?
| Thawn716 chapter 5 . 1/31/2007
When was this story updated? Never mine two great chapters right there and at least it explains why there was a major military camp at the entrance to the valley.
| Spiritual Stone chapter 4 . 12/24/2006
Aw, this chapter was so cute! Short, but cute. When I looked at the title I'm like wha . . . ? but it makes sense now.
Merry Christmas, Happy New Year and Jolly Holidays, mate!
| Thawn716 chapter 3 . 12/19/2006
Interesting seeing how she acts when she first sees a hylian. Though it was kind of hard to understand your first half of the chase as I had to reread it several times to fully understand what was going on.
| Spiritual Stone chapter 3 . 12/19/2006
Damn. That was awesome! The mental map thing, the horse race, the . . . the . . . everything! It was so exciting! Anywho, it was great. Is the guy Link? Or is he just some random guy?
Um . . . is kissable a word?
| Spiritual Stone chapter 2 . 12/13/2006
But what's the story line? Wasn't the Kokiri's name Wren? The one that got kidnaped? A little confused.
Anywho, where'd you get the name Vivi? It's a nice name.
| Spiritual Stone chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
I will say that again.
Holy crap that was one awesome starting!