Reviews for Four
razmatazz chapter 1 . 11/1/2006
i love your stories. the only reason why i can't review them all is because there're too many of them! haha. but seriously, you're a very very good writer. and you have a good eye. :)

i love this song! i've actually associated it to rent too. this fic was so perfect for it. 'Four' was so sad. it was sad, but it was honest, which made it very good. i feel for mark, i really do. your fics make me do that. he seems more real when you write him. :)

again, terrific job! i'll be waiting for more! :D
Bardlover chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Sad, but wonderful.
Tina101 chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
I like how each section is the same legnth, that takes patience. Anyway, this sounds really good, so update soon!

~Tina101
toooldforthissite chapter 1 . 10/22/2006
Wow, this was really good! However, I do have few tips... You said that you were trying a new writing style for you, so I won't be harsh. -nods-

At times the flow of everything somewhat got confusing. I got somewhat lost also. The flow of the story was pretty much changing all the time that it got confusing. That's all I can think of to work on.

But besides that, hey, IT WAS GREAT!

Never stop writing!

~*~mindreader208