|Reviews for Treachery Of The Mind|
| JerinAnn6397 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
I love this. It's not FAIR! I cried when he left in New Moon and this is making me cry hard. This is the end of my review so i can see if i can stop crying. This is going to my favorites. :)
| Vampiregirl595 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I'm going to start crying it was so good
| Edwardjustproposed chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
| Suze chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I love this. Excellent job. You wrote in Edward's perspective really well.
| Alanna chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
OMC! that was beutiful. i was actualy crying when i read this and only the real scene in new moon can make me cry anymore. i loved it! You should totally right your own book, if you havent already of course.
| Lynnliz13 chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
you write edward very, very well. why are you always so insecure about it? (which i say because in a few of your other stories, you've mentioned something about it...)
i think i'll check out that songfic, actually. i don't usually - i'm not really into them, you see. but you're a great author, and i'm interested to see what you think happens after he leaves. i tried to write a midnight sun-new moon thing, but couldn't get past the first couple pages.
| master of time chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I like how you portrayed Edward's emotions. I think you captured his thoughts and character very some places you overdid his discriptions, but Edward Cullen is very complex and difficult character to write, and I think you wrote him quite well.
| Topaz Ki chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
*cries* so sad
| twilightlover1417 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
aww i'm crying again
| Sakiru Yume chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Wow, that was angsty and just so...Edward. I found it amusing that you (he) site his heart so often when his doesn't beat.
| karina5185 chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Amazing. That's all I can say.
| Eldrvarya Hljodhrc chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
It was hard at Bella's pov, but Edward's... wow... that's all I can say... just... wow... You went deep, said what Edward HAD to be thinking...
| onpermanenthaitus chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
aww that was sad, you are good at writing his POV you should write like when he leaves to italy in his POV and when she finds him too.
| bloodwhore chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
| GingerBookworm chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
*starts sobbing from the sadness*that was so incredibly sad. but your writing is wonderful