Reviews for Winter Romance
Kitsune Tanaka chapter 1 . 11/10/2006
AWW! It was SO good! Everything! The grammar, the punctuation, of course, the story, EVERYTHING! I love it!

-Kit
TheDevilMayCry chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
m, smut is good. great job.
CatofCompleteChaos chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Tee...Roy's an ass.

Well done
ursweetheartless chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
HUZZAAH! now THERE was porn without plot

delicious delicious porn without plot...
animecrazd chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
yea porn.

It was good but the ending felt rushed all in all out of all I would give it 3 stars.

I wanted to say great job for having the corage to post this I haven't yet found the corage.
Silverhelix chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Yep. Thats how you do a PWP.
yaoininja chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
That was really good, but six sentences in a row starting with 'Roy' is kinda etchy. Try using synonyms, like 'the colonel' or 'the blond' and make the sentences flow more. Also, more details would be nice, like inner thoughts. "he felt as though he would go crazy if he didn't move faster" stuff like that.