Reviews for Smoke
Miyazaki A2 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
That was so pretty...I loved the bittersweet ending. It's so sad about Asuma...to think, the only canon couple in the Naruto Universe had to end before we even learned about it. So sad.

But anyways, great job. I loved this fic. :)
Phylli chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
ah, just reminded me Asuma was going to die...AND LEAVE KURENAI PREGNANT!Jeez, but its good.
n00b-masta2112 chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Interesting. I liked it. w00t! for unexpected ShikaKuren at the end! Yay!
cherrysmex23 chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
Really short...but also uber-sweet.

I really wish he hadn't died, but if he hadn't, we wouldn't have the smoking Shikamaru that we all know and love.

Awesome job. I really love this story.
Sibilant Whisper chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Great job, and you found a way to include Shikamaru's suffering as well. Great job. -_- -sniff-
Ceestar chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
That's really good, I like the your summary/last line. That's so sweet. I still miss Sensei so much...

Great job.
Forever'sNotEnoughToLuvU chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
It was great,dang why'd Kishi have to make him die?
BFDreaming chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Asumaa! (cries) Aya misses Asuma-sensei...even though he was a pretty minor character... (sniffle)
Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Wow. I liked this...