|Reviews for Chaos in Wystern|
| windnara chapter 7 . 4/22/2009
...it's hard to understand what are you writing about...and mind you I finished swordcraft story before...
| MikariStar chapter 7 . 3/5/2009
This is very good, looking forward to more!
| NybCR chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
Heheh, pretty interesting so far... it seems you've got a problem with spaces after punctuation marks, but that might just be a glitch with the server... still, you might want to try to correct it; it's kind of hard to read when everything's packed so closely together. Also-just a technical thing here-in Summon Night, Rumari is the "ex-Craftlord of Jade", and her brother Ureksa is the new Craftlord of Jade.
But, hey, other than that, it's pretty interesting. I shall continue reading it. _
| Jenvaati chapter 5 . 2/23/2007
Hahaha, the whole Sakuro and Pratty thing is great...And the 'goop' of tension made me laugh! Haha, awesome word right there!
(Felt like typing that!)
See ya, and cheers!
| Craftlord of Legend chapter 6 . 2/22/2007
You are AMAZING with your story. Though the length's short, but the humor's good...unlike mine. (cries horribly) That's because I am officially a bad writer...
| frozenmoogle chapter 6 . 2/21/2007
This is cool and funny! I love humorous Pratty Varil fics, wait, this'll turn out to be a PrattyxVaril right? Right? RIGHT?
And for some reason, I never really liked Clarie either... I liked the part with Rondeau's clothes, HILARIOUS!
| Jenvaati chapter 4 . 1/1/2007
HAHAHA, that is so funny! Poor Sakuro, I feel really, really, really, really, really sorry for him. 'Cuz that's what my little brother does to me! Wow, Sakuro was amazing! And so were the bananas! That chapter made me hungry...I think I'll eat dinner soon...
Here is a list of craftlords:
Sakuro, Rondeau, Kouren, Pratty or Cleru, Lubert, Ureksa, and Tyram.
And here are there gems respectively:
Sapphire, Diamond, Ruby, Iron, Amber, Jade, and Crystal.
Rondeau's also the head! Hope that helps! See ya, and cheers! Awesome chapter!
| Craftlord of Legend chapter 4 . 12/27/2006
Hahaha, Pratty is so funny when she is annoying...I love this chapter, but it's still on the short side...it's hilarious, though. Hmm, was Varil showing hints of him liking Clarie? I think so...
Bananas! Hahaha...but it's true, you can get kind of obsessed over them...and Sakuro losing his cool was funny. Totally hilarious, since I've never seen him do that...over Pratty, of course.
Keep up the humour...I like it very much.
| Revir chapter 3 . 12/20/2006
YAY, i get a cookie :P.
Anyway, i like the way you portrait Pratty, loved the races, the way she easily keeps up with Sakuro and loved the poking with a stick scene, it was really cool.
Poor Varil, of all the places he could end up on... i never did like Claire... don't know why exactily...
Please remember all that you have forgotten so that i can read more of this!
| Mana Prism chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
Very short chapters...but they're looking good!
A lot of people seem to favour Kutty as a GB. He is really cute, but I prefer Rasho :)
I live in Australia too! Please update ASAP!
| Jenvaati chapter 3 . 11/29/2006
Haha, Pratty's scared of ghosts but not something big like Parista...
For some reason I'm getting an image of Varil reading an upside-down map. Heh, and it looks really funny. Even though it was short...I liked it, see ya, and cheers!
| Mia Aulair chapter 3 . 11/28/2006
Yay good chappie.
| emperorprotects chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Great mine. *Cries*
Check out my story and tell me how bad it is.
Your story is great by the been waiting for a pratty and varil why does claire need to be there ? I mean i know it adds something when theres a love triangle but - Oh forget story rox !
| Keijiro Mishima chapter 2 . 10/28/2006
I'm writing my first fanfic in Naruto butI am working on a summon night now its a great story I'm adding to my fave story list
| peonelopie4 chapter 2 . 10/27/2006
I really like this and your doing good keep it up!