Reviews for Shadows
awesome kitten chapter 12 . 3/1
sooooo. Two souls. A ghost and a human?
awesome kitten chapter 8 . 3/1
Stupid, this wouldn't have happened if you had stayed with jim
awesome kitten chapter 6 . 3/1
i love that Jim. this is such a good story
Krusher chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
So apparently is is ghost enough that he is immortal after all?
7536897647356356 chapter 11 . 11/18/2014
Yes! For tonight! So he'll be tormented again? Oh wow, how horrible can a girl get?

ED21 out
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 12 . 8/23/2014
Interesting...Just what Jessica wants has got to be unearthly.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 11 . 8/23/2014
This was a very sweet chapter. A nice change.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 10 . 8/23/2014
Not a dry eye in the house. Well done, describing the vivid terror coursing through Danny during his nightmare. The part where he woke up was full of meaning.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 9 . 8/22/2014
You can tell just how worn down he is, and the fact that it's his very own mother there to save him, and accepting him without knowing who he is...it really brought him back. Nicely done.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 8 . 8/22/2014
To go through all that tortured cell time, and then nearly be defeated by rats...that's a horrible way to think you'll go.

Well done, capturing the instincts Danny has, and gradually leading up to the scene when Maddie discovers him.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 7 . 8/22/2014
Of course, he gets the worst of luck. Those little critters can deliver nasty bites.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 6 . 8/22/2014
That was a very spirit-lifting chapter. You really captured how some people can really be caring in the world, when times are rough.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
Aha. I see Danny's regained some of his sarcasm. The little girl in this chapter was a nice touch, too.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 4 . 8/22/2014
That was incredibly descriptive. And very deep, on some sort of instinctive level about death.
RestlessRaggedandReckless chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
I just...I know for a fact that somehow Danny coalesces back into existence, because Maddie eventually finds him, and I'm clinging to that thought. However, the stark fact that he faded like that, into mere nothingness, is startling. Very well written.
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