|Reviews for Grow Up|
| A chapter 1 . 7/18
| walmar chapter 1 . 4/27
Very good and well written, I feel you captured Alan very well. Look forward to more
| lilsis15 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
WOW, powerful story, I liked this point-of-view shown.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
This is really really gooddd i really had fun reading it and was sooo when i saw it only had one chapter
| FutureAuthoress13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
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| thewolfgurlgleek chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This is amazing! Never considered that was why Jeff kept Allan out! Great job!
| Writer with sprite chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Wow, powerful ending.
| tukatarina chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
ahhh! that was sooo good! i kept looking at the bottom of the screening, trying to see if the button for the next chapter would magically appear. Sadly, it never did.
That was great though, nice work!
| spectre chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Did you know there's a new place for all of us movieverse fans? You may want to move all your movieverse work over to the Thunderbirds slot on the Movies category page.
| Ihni chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
VERY intense. Thank you :)
| Magical Cthulhu chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
| Ambernine chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Nicely done! Very intense but totally believable! A good follow-up would be Jeff's reaction to what Alan has said.
| straywriting chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
That was intense. Good job though;
| sam temple chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Loved it. You should continue with it.
| Lady Artemist chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Wow, definitely different from what happend but so very powerful. Written very well...great job!