|Reviews for Magic Of One Dance|
| Tsuki No Shuurai chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Whoa...good work. The mood on this scene was wonderful!
| Blade chapter 16 . 9/15/2007
Loved the ending. I was chuckling at your genius for making Sarah the last obstacle.
| Blade chapter 13 . 9/15/2007
The royal family resorts to fist fights! I couldn't believe it! But then again, it is a rather refreshing twist, given all the other stories I've read. You have a definite unique style, Moon.
| Blade chapter 8 . 9/15/2007
Chapter 8 needs to read 'his side' not 'hid side'. I nearly fell out of my chair. But still, love how the story is developing so far.
| Blade chapter 2 . 9/15/2007
You have a wonderful plot and characters going, but for the love of art and literature, fix you grammatical and typo slip ups! won't has an apostrophe in it in the second chapter!
| Blade chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
Chapter 1 has some capitalization issues, but is otherwise okay, with your word choice and character portrayal.
| RLupin chapter 16 . 9/13/2007
Very nice story.
| petal quills chapter 16 . 5/24/2007
This is an amazing story.
I just finished reading it all and I love your writing technique.
Is there going to be a sequel?
| LilithBlack333 chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Did you know that The Jim Henson company along with TokyoPop made a sequel? Spread the news! Find out more on Wikipedia.
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 16 . 4/28/2007
Lol! I like the ending!
| writtenfables chapter 16 . 4/17/2007
This was an interesting story. I liked it. Especially when Sarah punches Dai and says that there was nothing in the aggreement that she couldn't banish him. LOL.
| RIP chapter 5 . 4/12/2007
Absolutely nonsensical. Total rubbish.
| angel's-one-and-only chapter 16 . 4/8/2007
Very cute. Love Jareth's possessiveness! always hot! Love his compassion and how loving and kind and gentle he can be. loved the story, a little sad it is over. but all great things must come to an end, darn it! *giggles* Anyway, again, loved the story, keep writting. I loved how gentle and loveable you made Sarah and absolutely loved the Deryck parts! so jealous and cute! Loved it all. Keep on writting. you will go far.
| AngelofMercy86 chapter 16 . 4/6/2007
Nice ending. I like how Sarah gets to decide if they get their baby back.
| notwritten chapter 16 . 4/6/2007