Reviews for TEKNOMAN II
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 3 . 5/21/2009
Not Bad yeah well no one perfect but I can't wait to see what happens
SSJ-Jolt chapter 3 . 5/11/2007
Did you even TRY and proof read this or did you just crap it out?

No one's going to be on the edge of thier seats with this garbage. I'm serious though, a little proofreading from a third party, like myself, could turn total crap into a shining work of art. I WANT to help you ok?

Please don't make yourself look any worse and let me help you.
SSJ-Jolt chapter 2 . 2/11/2007
Good lord what is this shit? I want to read it but I can't. It's so horribly written not even the nisest english teacher would consider giving it a mark higher then an F (Or E if you went to my school). Look if you really want this fic to workout send me a reply and I'll start betaing your chapters for you, ok?