Reviews for Alphabet Soup
the-daughter-of-poseidon312 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Aw...
Will smith chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
i liked it, not the story of the year, but pretty good.
Pinguin1993 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Great story. Really.. Sweet. I never expected myself saying this about Raven, but... well.

Nice work. (:
Kiluca1228 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
what a good story :)
midnight.wolf62 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Wow, this is great.

I loved it. The story format was very unique.

And I'll have to agree with LM22102; the hint of R/R was a nice touch.

Can't wait to read your other stories.

Faved & Alert. :)
cocolovesyou chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
That was so amazing! Ah! I loved it.
heartless16 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
love the story! :)
amethyst-dreams27 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Wow, this story is so deep. It has so many different layers that you explored really nicely. Raven and Red X's relationship, Raven and Robin's relationship, Raven's guilt, Robin's concern... It was really great! And the unconscious spelling in Raven's alphabet soup really portrayed Raven's feelings.

Awesome work, keep it up!

Ammie
PhantomElphaba chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Ok, I'm an avid Rae/Rob shipper, so the Rae/X shippings are a bit...off to me. But I still like the way you write.
Chi Yagami chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
me liky
theLilyLady chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
you've made me want to eat vanilla fudge ice-cream...

I don't know whether it's your writing, or the fact that it is absolutely sweltering with humidity and this UNRELENTING HEAT...

but I want to eat ice-cream!

That and buy myself some alphabet soup...
Weaving Bard chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
You're KILLING ME!

Robin
lesjeux chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Wow. That's awesome writing!_ I love the idea, and even more, the writing.
MrsSakuraPotter chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Oh no. It is 4am and you got me reading another one. Lol.

(I just wanted to check out Three Little Words after my Human Bio quiz then sleep.)

Tsk... Now I'm going to have to read one more. Maybe. Lol.

I'll read more later. When I'm not working so that I can afford my ever increasing tution. *forlorn sigh*

Anywho, I thought it was pretty self-explanitory. But with dim people existant in the world, I don't blame you for putting the ships at the end.

Do you have an LJ?
Mussayyy chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
That was creative of you to come up with a story idea. I especially like the last part. You gave a very big impact.

Also, I really love the way you write. The way you play with words is so beautiful. I can visualize what the characters are doing.

I hope you write more. You're a talented writer.
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