|Reviews for Can I Keep You?|
| Mia Fitzpatrick chapter 7 . 11/9/2006
I really liked this chapter, I adored the tension between the two of them and the fact that they both seem to be trying to tempt each other but neither willing to let go, it just increases that unresolved sexual tension and just, they sizzle. I love Mifuyu and her husband, they sound adorable and I wouldn't mind reading more about them in the future. But I seriously cannot wait til Raiha comes back because I want Fuuko to slap their relationship in Tokiya's face, he just deserves it. (Although, I'm still going, poor Raiha, he's a tool for revenge, wah, make sure he's happy in the end!) Can't wait for the update!
| Obsessed Dreamer chapter 7 . 11/9/2006
kaiya is toki's child! sorry, my bad. hehe, it's just that her eyes remind me so much of fuu-chan rather than tokiya. his are baby blue, like chips of ice while fuu-chan's are that of the ocean. kaiya's overall profile are reminiscent of toki though, that's why i said she's a good combi of tofuu. *toinkz*
loved the fic. for a first time writer, you rock! it's written in the traditional filipino romance and yet not OOC. yes, you're fic reminds me PHR's classics. XD
keep updating. fun chap btw. toki's in denial, haha!
| abubi-chan chapter 7 . 11/9/2006
aww... that was a sweet way to end this chapter! i don't have much to say, but update!
| anon chapter 7 . 11/8/2006
YES! I do love it and the previous chap! Sorry I wasn't able to review the last time... I read it while I was doing projects...hehe. It is turning out quite well a few errors here and there but it's fine! I liked the scene where the two children offered their hankies to the two and said sorry, I could just imagine...it would be a cute scene and if I was in Tokiya and Fuuko's place I too would've laughed :)
The thing about Tokiya giving in to his daughter's pouting face just proves that Tokiya really have a soft spot. He is not really an ice man. I mean he gives in to Yanagi and Ganko too...
Tokiya and Fuuko...are...big...COWARDS...yes...they still love each other and they are both hurting and hurting each other but they woun't admit it...well I guess that's the beauty of the story :)
Please update soon! Goodluck!
| Mayumi Reiko chapter 7 . 11/8/2006
I think I'm the first one to review in your chappie ne? Anyways Thanks for the review Nee-chan! , We... I love it Nee-chan! It's so mushy and funny. We... hormones hormones... How I wish they were together. Some minor errors... , anyways... I really love it! Nee-chan can you draw shoji! I wanna see him... , Update update! I can't wait! Tokiya is nicer here than before... Fishing is his expertise... ohh... I think that's one of the factors why Fuuko fell in love with him because he sets a perfect bait for Fuuko! , wah... mwah... Teehee...
| yanagi-chyan chapter 7 . 11/8/2006
wait a minute! fuu-chan is still engaged, right? how come she's trying to attract mi-chan again? fuu-chan's so naughty! mi-chan's totally falling for her! hahaha!
poor raiha.. :(
| Shenhui chapter 7 . 11/8/2006
*laughing* oh so funny.. I love the bit when they fell in the water and the bit about Mifuyu and his husband.. I really do love love-hate relationships..lolz..
Mi-chan is blushing... kawaii!
Oh btw...*took hold of Raiha's hand* thank you for letting me console Raiha... rest assure that he will be taken care of properly... and... it would be quite some time before I return him to you...bwahahahahaha... lolz...
| malo chapter 7 . 11/8/2006
nice work! promise this review won't take long...(i was kinda carried away last time, gomen...hehe)
kaiya's so cute teasing tokiya like that...haha :D
so, tokiya's trying to supress his feelings for fuuko, huh? well that won't work, sprecially when fuuko's around...he's gonna give in to his feelings sooner or later...and i bet fuuko's gonna fall for him again (revenge? what revenge? haha)
oh well, can't wait for the update! more tofuu, i suppose..;P
keep up the good work! *hugs*
| elven-faerie.aerowin chapter 6 . 11/6/2006
weird...i mean the name of kaiya
if you ever analyzed it Tokiya's co-master
of the hyomon ken,kai, his name is there...
good story hehehe
tofuu-nee i loke it a lot...
| Shenhui chapter 6 . 11/4/2006
I like the scenes.. I think it would really be fun to read once Fuuko's plans are in action...(specially if her plan backfires...) and oh tell Fuuko not to worry about Raiha... I can console him as long as he wants to be consoled... wahehehe...do continue..
| malo chapter 6 . 11/4/2006
kaiya's so adorable...i just wish she was fuuko's and tokiya's daughter instead...*sigh*
at last, tofuu moments!
and they kissed...woohoo!;P
so much for revenge, ne? haha!
c'mon fuuko, forget about raiha! long distance relationships never work! you don't have to feel guilty at all...
he might even be having an affair behind your back...*winkwink*
as for tokiya...you've missed her didn't you? ha, your longing for her was evident in the way you kissed her...
smooth move mi-chan!;P but i think you still have to make up for what you did to her, BIG TIME...you big meanie!
anyway, nice chapter! i'm glad that you update fast...:D
but, i think you have to check your grammar (tenses, s-v agreement), though i don't usually mind some of it..hey, it's the plot that counts anyway, ne? (please don't get mad...)
can't wait for the next chapter! kinda intrigued on what's gonna happen to their fishing trip...
hm, more tofuu moments i suppose...
so, fuuko's finally gonna take her "plans" into action...hm...
please don't make her such a meanie, i mean, i can handle tokiya's meanness, but fuuko?
she's just so sweet to be a meanie...
| Mayumi Reiko chapter 6 . 11/3/2006
We... nice chappie... oh... love the kissing part... but Fuuko was a bit guilty of what she did. anyways... update soon... some minor error... wrong spelling and grammar but the story itself is so nice... can't wait! by the way... Kaiya is so Kawaii... can I bring her home and she can be my lil' sis... *Mikagami glares at me* opz ,
| Sirena87 chapter 6 . 11/3/2006
aw.. it sweet. although Mi-chan's getting ALOT colder... hmm.. good chapter... update soon
| yanagi-chyan chapter 6 . 11/3/2006
poor fuuko! she must be so confused, omg.. i could really feel her pain. *cries*
mi-chan's an idiot! i will never quit mi-chan bashing if he continues being such an insensitive jerk. hahaha, he gave her a mild kiss that lasted half a minute? what kind of mild kiss is that? ;D
update! good luck with your next chapter!
| abubi-chan chapter 6 . 11/3/2006
this is a nice chapter. although a teeny tiny grammatical errors, it still caught me off-guard with your plot. i love it! and yes, don't make fuuko all bitchy seductress crap when you're in the point in making tokiya fall in love with her... make her the sweet innocent girl she really is! heehee. and forget about raiha! sheesh. although i pity the guy though. then again, don't forget about him! use him as a tool for a great jealous-tokiya!
PS are you pinay? haha... our sem break is also gonna end three days from now, so i bet you study here in the philli.