Reviews for Can I Keep You?
Obsessed Dreamer chapter 16 . 2/21/2007
hmm, i haven't reviewed for a very long time. nice ending. and it's itadakimasu, lol! i didn't say this is from my dream coz as you've put it, this story came from *cough* i just dreamt of reading it years prior i actually got to read it. i'm weird like that, lol! write more! for someone who claims to be a newbie, this is good. keep up the good work!
Shenhui chapter 16 . 2/20/2007
Like it? I'm sorry Khryzle but I didn't like it...

I LOVED IT!..*laughs* this ending is cute and funny...*giggles* Especially Fuuko's running and the announcement...*laughs maniacally* CONGRATULATIONS!

An epilogue would really be nice..*winks* about your question I think it's spelled "itadakimasu"... that's all..

Chinitz chapter 16 . 2/20/2007
Nice Job! :)

It took a while but it was worth the wait :) I like how you ended the story (or how you ended this chapter :) cuz im asumming a epilogue) **flashes her big smile with matching shiny teeth** And you said you’re a new writer (bows to khryzle) I wouldn’t know if you didn’t tell :) You did a great job! :) I’ll be waiting for your next fics :D
jae maknae chapter 16 . 2/19/2007
I'm happy yet sad this fic ended...;;

Anyways, I love this fic to death!

If it is not too much trouble, can you make an epilouge?
malo chapter 16 . 2/19/2007
finally, you've updated!

i thought you were gonna leave us hanging there...hehe...

its nice of raiha to admit his mistake...i like him again...

he really does love fuuko doesn't he?it's ok,he's got you anyway!lol!;P

loved the ending, with tokiya proposing like's not that romantic,but it's kilig anyway...

adding an epilogue would be really nice...

great story!hope you'd write more tofuu...(soon,lol!)*winkwink*

hm,should i look forward to the epilogue?hehe...

luv yah!*hugs*
larsha chapter 16 . 2/19/2007
wow... great story..
mikaro chapter 16 . 2/18/2007
aha! Omedetou Khryzle-chan! Hehe...shiver me timbers I had a laugh with this chap...which is...NOT SUPPOSED to be the last. Meaning...oh you know well what that means darl...or else I will definitely give you some bashing! *cracks knuckles* hehehe...kidding _ kawaii story...UPDATE! (no I am not asking for an epilogue because I won't consider this as finished) ehehehe...well gambate. And hope to read more from you.
asianpearl chapter 16 . 2/18/2007
the perfect ending for the perfect story! omg..please add the epilouge! loved the intercom scene. Great Job! i'll be expecting more stories from you ok?


LOve ya!
yan-chan chapter 16 . 2/18/2007
yay, the end! loved the peaceful ending, with everyone getting what they want and happy about it. LOL. and i saw that the end had a tensy bit of raiha/neon to it. ;)

the airport scene was pretty funny. i kind of thought that you'd make a dramatic scene of it actually! *had pictured fuuko coming to the airport too late or something close to that*

your take on it was much more fun and i really liked that twist you put. great job and well done! *huggles*

next story!
MunlytAngel01 chapter 16 . 2/18/2007
whoa! raiha... so sad... sorry mi-chan but this time, my heart goes to raiha... that was a brave thing of him to do... aww...

neweiz, nice scene at the airport! hahaha! that had me laughing so hard! go fuuko-chan! hahaha!

can't believe this story is finished already... but hey, why not make an epilogue? ne ne? onegai?

you're a good author... i do hope to hear more from you... write more tofu please?
MunlytAngel01 chapter 15 . 2/18/2007
wow... nice chapter! hahaha! the three bear song! i know that! it's kinda cute i can even imagine tokiya's daughter singing it! hahaha! oh my god... can't wait for the next chap!
alf05 chapter 16 . 2/18/2007
kawaii kawaii!

such a lovely ending!

and sorry if I haven't been reviewing the late chaps...

but rest assure that I was reading all of them...

that's why I'm begging you!

-get down on her knees both hands clamped in front of her face-

Please! Do write an epilogue!
elven-faerie.aerowin chapter 15 . 2/2/2007
hey!it's a long time since i last reviewed...i missed a lot...climax!what's with the whole aishiteru thing? she confessed once again?
malo chapter 15 . 1/30/2007
sorry i scared you,i just got carried!

i just can't take men and their possessiveness...i really don't dislike raiha (i thought he was nice...), but because of the circumstances, well, i kinda felt mad at him...sorry...

just make sure you keep raiha handcuffed to you,okay?;P (i know you wouldn't mind, would you?lol...just kidding!)

anyway,it's a nice chapter,though its quite sad...with the crying and all...

kaiya's so cute singing the three bears song...(i kinda remember song hye kyo doing it...haha!i liked full house...)

they still have a chance together!

kaiya likes fuuko so much she is willing to have her as mom!that's nice...

so,when's fuuko gonna leave raiha for tokiya?hehe...

can't wait for the update!

good work! *hugs*

sorry again...i promise you that i will not get carried away ever...;P
khryz chua chapter 15 . 1/29/2007
this might probably be my last review so i better make this long and i demand ur time in reading this. i like this story and im happy that your plot was well-settled. im sure you know that i didnt mean to flame in the last chapters, its my way of showing affection as what u always say.

if ever we met again after our departure, i would be happy if i wont see you engage and with a raiha-like lover beside you. rest assured that i will not marry a neon-like girl either, if i would, we'll get divorce after the day of our nuptial.

i completely understood ur reason for breaking up with me but i doubt i might even find a french girl as wacky and as mongoloid as you do. that's the reason why i cant believe u cant trust me for that. monkeys like you are rare in the wild world, why would i date a NORMAL girl if i already met the 'one of a kind'?

ur probably mad and want to struggle me right now but to hell i care. its ur fault you broke up with me anyway, so im gonna bug you with all the irritable words i can find (so probably this irritable words can bash ur dense mind out). and besides, im sure ur still reading this since u can never resist my charm.

and when we meet again and ur with somebody else, ill pop ur boyfriend's eye out until u settle down with me. why?are you thinking ill be submissive like raiha?come on, whats the use of u and ur friends calling me "mi-chan"?are u THAT dense not to know?

when i leave for france, i demand ur presence in the airport and dont you dare play the "im so sick i dont want to go" acting with me coz it wouldnt work. i would still make u come and bid ur goodbye even if ur sick. believe me, if i wont see u in the airport, ill practically go in ur university and drag you to france with me (u will, of course, occupy my luggage).

i doubt this RATIONAL words from my mind will clean ur DENSE decision so ill just leave. aishiteru, mongoloid.
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