Reviews for Speechless
Post U Later chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Oh Wow, That Was So Touching. I Like How You Brought Up How Dean Walked In On Sam Watching Porn. That Made Me Laugh. I Love Dean's Little 'Awkward' From That. So Cute. X3

Great Story, I Love Emotional Dean.
amyblair chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
Aw, damn. I wish Dad had found another way, too!

I love that you take this from silence to talking, to heartbreaking, to funny, back to a sad-okay-feel.

Really, though, a fantastic tag.
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
One of the best tags that I have read for CSPWDT. Perfect characterisation and their emotions were so believable. Loved the banter at the end - “So…did the zombie break your hand, or was it a…TV related injury?” So funny and just so Dean!

Great job. Sorry it has taken me over 3 years to find and read this!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Aw. I love the brothers caring for each other and this tag winds up that scene and ep perfectly.

Nicely done. :)
twinchaosblade chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Very nice tag for 'Children Shouldn't Play With Dead Things'. I really liked the way you described how Sammy was at a total loss for the right words despite the fact that he usually is the one for emotional talk. Both of them hurt but in a different way, and for a change it was sort of hard for Sam to deal with his not-so-cocky brother. Their final heart-to-heart was a great mix of tackling the emotional trauma and trying to return things to the lighter side of conversation between them. Great characterizations and story-telling!

Even at the risk of being very nitpicking, I think there is one minor flaw in the story: Your wrote yourself that Sam was hardly able to do anything with his right hand because it was broken. Both in the episode he didn't use his right hand at all, nor when he reached for the glove compartment to get to the ID's, so I keep wondering how he managed to turn the ignition to start the car. Just a thought.
imissmymind chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
“So…did the zombie break your hand, or was it a…TV related injury?"

Oh gosh. Burst out laughing at that one. Cute little story. I find tags from that ep really interesting.
rholou chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
great resolution to the scene, i think this fits in perfectly with the show.
Kaewi chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I don't know how I missed this one, but apparently I didn't read it when it was posted. Very nice tag. I love how you slowly brought them back to somewhat normal very gradually; it worked well. You can definitely feel the tension throughout.

Are you writing again soon? D
SupernaturalGeek chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
That was really nicely written - good characterisation and nice mix of emotion & humour.

And makes a change to find a Supernatural fan/author whose not female too! I'm sure there are lots of you out there, I think us girls are just more vocal about it! ;)

Look forward to reading more of your stuff..
KatieLB chapter 1 . 12/26/2006
Another really good little tag scene... I so can see dean teasing sam LOL great job
Polgana chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I have seen so many treatments of that scene, even have one of my own typed up as a proloque to a longer piece. Your story is very true to the characters and makes you wonder: what was the real motive behind John's actions? Why wouldn't he work with Sam to find a better solution? That was a truly powerful scene, and you have truly done it justice.
SweetJubilee chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Yeah!

E.R visit?. . . Well . . . Free - cause they used scammed credit cards.

Motel room? . . . Free - and for the same reason.

Hearing Our Boys heal eachother's wounds by laughing about porn? . . . Priceless

There are some things money can't buy. For everything else, there's fake credit cards.

Thank's for this fic!
Faye Dartmouth chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
These boys. They're just so impossibly...boy-like

I love Sam admitting that he would have traded himself for Dean in an instant. It's true and provides a certain amount of balance that lets Dean know just how much he is valued and loved.

And you incorporated the porn reference without making me hate it, so kduos :)

And what's NEXT on the horizon in terms of your fic writing...?
shywalk chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Wonderful...just so...right :) Thank you
sparkyfma2000 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
awesome story!
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