Reviews for Hidden Love
Gertie2 chapter 11 . 6/16/2014
Hallelujah, Eames kicking Bobbys ass. About time. I thoroughly enjoyed this (maybe too much)l
Thanks, maybe you could write something about her setting him straight about Nelda and Nicole Wallace. Thanks
ReadNWrite4U chapter 13 . 7/20/2012
I read this story a while back and just sat down to re-read some of my favorite chappies. This story is beautiful. This was the first LOCI Fanfiction I read and I completely credit you (blame you) for my unhealthy obsession with these two.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/12/2012
Translate portuguese in Brasil.
Grande fic! Desculpe só agora estar comentando, mas estou neste site a apenas três anos e ainda tem muitas histórias que não li, até que cheguei a ela através do favoritos de outro leitor. Sempre quis ler uma fic CI com o ponto de vista de Alex pois eu ficava com a sensação que Bobby tinha que sempre carregar o peso da relação e que Alex sempre estava passiva, alheia, e vê-la em conflito, medos e incertezas, que normalmente sempre é o papel de Bobby, foi ótimo! É bom vê-la no papel inverso para variar. Só uma coisa não me agradou, foi que durante a investigação , Bobby ficou muito aquém de seu brilhantismo, pois Alex viu detalhes que sabemos que ele deveria ter visto e que foi ela que praticamente resolveu o caso. Não que ela não seja capaz, longe disso,mas é que não estou acostumada a um Bobby desatento principalmente em coisas que ele domina,como pequenas pistas, como os pelos do gato, e o perfil dos criminosos, mas dado o fato de que toda a fic girou em torno das dúvidas e medos dela, Alex, acho que não foi algo que possa ser irreparável. Enfim, uma grande fic. Eu não entendi bem o porque você desistiu de colocar suas fics aqui, mas eu lamento sua decisão pois você é uma excelente escritora e nós fãs CI teremos uma grande perda. Na verdade, nem sei se você vai estar lendo esse comentário mas tive necessidade de escrever. De qualquer forma, se decidir voltar e e escrever CI estarei lendo, ok? Agradeço que não desativou seu perfil, pois eu não teria tido a chance de ler esta fic legal. Fui!
insubordinationfreak chapter 13 . 4/28/2012
I know this is six years after you've written it, but I loved your story. It was so easy to skip my eyes over every sentence because each word was riveting. It was an insightful and awesome story from Alex's head. The poem at the end was so lovely. Thanks for a great few hours of reading.
Medea Callous chapter 13 . 5/9/2009
Wow, what a magnificent story! Absolutely beautiful, and you managed to sidestep two of the most common devices/cliches: hospital and Bobby crying! This is the first Eames POV fic I've read, and I love it!
Medea Callous chapter 6 . 5/9/2009
Wow this is an awesome fic - really top-flight. Especially the two paragraphs in this chappie about how Eames had declared herself the defender of what they had... really really deep and insightful.
Cyd the Squid chapter 13 . 1/18/2009
This was really good. I'd love to see a sequel to find out what happens with them at work, etc., but overall a great story and great characterizations of Bobby and Alex.
Partri65 chapter 6 . 10/5/2008
This is a good combination of an interesting case and a look at the B/A relationship. The Alex POV works well with this story.
star jelly chapter 13 . 4/4/2008
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the ending and the killer was really creepy!
J Lesley chapter 13 . 11/24/2007
Absolutely loved this! You are an amazing writer, although there are a few spelling errors.
RoleModel2 chapter 13 . 10/31/2007
Great story, best i have ever read.
The Rocking Horse Winner chapter 13 . 10/15/2007
Thank you for writing a story that didn't erupt into a frenzy of lust and porn.
Mystricka chapter 13 . 5/9/2007
So ... that was amazing. I don't think I blinked once while reading that. You definately have a gift for writing. :)
BookWorm37 chapter 13 . 12/27/2006
Want to hear a frustrating story? You do? Good.

Okay, I was reading this story yesterday and had just clicked to read this last chapter when BAM my internet went out. Turns out it was out all over the town and the two towns/city over (along with many of the cell phone towers) because of the winter storms we're having. I was stuck, unable to read the last chapter, for about seventeen hours before I finally got my internet connection back. YAY. But, damn, those seventeen hours (that I was awake for) were torture trying to figure out how you did this.

Excellent job, it was worth the wait.
tere55 chapter 13 . 12/25/2006
Excellent, from beginning to end. I decided to reread this while waiting on the next installment of "The Road Not Taken."
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