Reviews for Monday's Child
amr56 chapter 1 . 8/15
Ino always did have a lot of potential. I like your take on her.
RedBrunja chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Great perspective on Ino.
Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Lovely insight.
apocatlypse chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
That was amazing :)
My Delilah chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
I really like this. It is short and sweet and perfect. And I love the poem at the end.

Good author's note, too. Yes. I did read it. And yes, I am commenting on it.

My Delilah
DuQaine chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
i liked every bit of it. short, yet the thoughts and details were intense, powerful and striking. gotta love it.
fraught chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Very lovely and clever, and just the sort of kunoichi I would expect Ino to become.

It did make me laugh though, because she and Shikamaru are only born a day apart, so that makes him "fair and wise and good and gay."
kosumi chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
describes Ino PERFECTLY! I love how there is only two straight lines that Ino knows of. SO COOL!
Ujikofuda chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
. This was very nice. I like the idea of curves, especially since I've never thought of it that way before.