|Reviews for Run|
| murphycat chapter 6 . 5/5/2008
I really enjoyed this. An unusual twist.
| ecrivain anonyme chapter 6 . 10/15/2007
I love it, very detaile yet not boring. The conversation is very funny. You showed the side of them which is neither the admiral or the president. I wish I could write as good as you.
| enlightenedkitty chapter 6 . 11/13/2006
Alright, I'm no longer sad: I got a hot makeout scene. I'm not sure my computer could handle a full-blown sex scene if you wrote it.
Final thoughts. Very well written, well paced, good dialogue, characters, blah blah blah. Seriously, you know how to write and it was a pleasure to read this.
| enlightenedkitty chapter 5 . 11/13/2006
Aww, no wonderfully written, unbelievably erotic love scene. I am sad.
| enlightenedkitty chapter 4 . 11/13/2006
And I thought the LAST cliffhanger was bad! :)
"Bill, you just drowned!" Pure, unadulterated genius!
| enlightenedkitty chapter 3 . 11/13/2006
What a bitch of a cliffhanger!
| enlightenedkitty chapter 2 . 11/13/2006
So, after two chapters I have only one complaint: "extraordinarily inviting seeming ground." Three adjectives is a little excessive, and the seeming is really, really unnecessary.
Other than that, very well written, good pace, good dialogue.
| enlightenedkitty chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Got me hooked fast. On to chapter 2...
| CanonAntithesis chapter 6 . 11/2/2006
This story was delightful. Loved the "scar" comment in this chapter. Look forward to many more stories from you.
| Mariel3 chapter 6 . 11/2/2006
This was a lovely end for your story. I loved the 'slightly bad idea' riff, but the earlier “I’m told the scar will barely be visible,” followed by: “Shame. Nothing says ‘power’ like a good scar,” was utterly perfect, too. Thank you, thank you, thank you for posting this here. It was a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to the next one!
| Carma chapter 6 . 11/2/2006
Yeah, that's what I meant! Woohoo!
The ending was perfect: they weren't just running from the Cylons but from each other as well. Love that!
Well done, awesome fic:)
| Carma chapter 5 . 11/2/2006
Yay, someone found them! Oh my gods, I was so worried about bill there.
But, then the inevitable *something* happened between them and they didn't even talk about it? Hm hm :P
| mkiara chapter 5 . 10/31/2006
lovely fic...pls update soon! wonder how roslin and adama is act once they're back on the ship...
| Carma chapter 4 . 10/30/2006
SQUE ! more please, this chapter was so suspenseful!
| Mariel3 chapter 4 . 10/29/2006
You know, I really, really like Bill and Laura on the run!
“We should keep moving,” he said, making to get up.
“What? Bill, you just drowned!” Laura protested incredulously.
“That’s true, but I doubt the Cylons will care..."
I'm not sure why that stuck me as so perfect, but it did. I guess 'cause it sounds so Bill...
Thanks for posting - I'm still enjoying!
“That’s true, but I doubt the Cylons will care.