Reviews for Return to Eternia Book One: Arrival
Philip Gipson chapter 9 . 10/19/2011
I see what you mean by wanting to rewrite "The Final Adventure." The original story felt rushed and out of place. Teela trusted Adam too quickly when he became He-Man in front of her. But now, in your rewrite, Teela is hurt about Adam and He-Man being one and the same. That, I feel, is a lot more appropriate.
Chris Gilbert chapter 8 . 1/29/2010
I could have sworn that in the days before He-man/Adam left for Primus, Teela not only knew they were one and the same but also that she and Adam had made love and connected(if you know what I mean)
Chris Gilbert chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
Hordak has alot of Audacity. If Knight Thunder had been there, she would have ripped off his head and fed him piece by piece to the buzzards.
Julielein chapter 9 . 11/14/2006
Fantastic.

Cant wait for the next part.
Julielein chapter 8 . 11/11/2006
Great updates.

Hope that soon come others.
Julielein chapter 4 . 11/2/2006
Cool story. I was very suprised too not only He-Man. :D

Whos the father from Addison ?

Please update soon.
Lord Vukodlak chapter 4 . 10/31/2006
Hmm, now I bet Adam is really surprised and a bit crushed inside. But as I recall from Shroud of the Horde the father is long gone.
Lord Vukodlak chapter 2 . 10/26/2006
oh He-Man is going to be really ticked, many of his former comrades are dead and he has no idea where Teela is.