Reviews for Mr Maybe
uselessacct chapter 4 . 11/15/2006
hmm... draco malfoy is really becoming a mr. maybe! i adore the way you wrote this story with the whole you spying on them with the reader. its something that people have rarely done and i think its great and unique and very clever. this a great story, and i hope you keep writing well!
Addicted2Love chapter 4 . 11/15/2006
i luv this story! and i think you've got loads of reviews for 4 chapters. especially since this story is still quite new. some people just don't review lol
Silidons chapter 4 . 11/15/2006

I loved the bit where Draco ran past the Ravenclaw table, where it said 'one, a girl I've been seeing everywhere lately'- I thought that was brilliant, tying in with the plot great.

The 'Previously On Mr Maybe' bits are great, they remindme of what happened last chapter, without having to reread it.

Can't wait for the next!

lost chapter 4 . 11/15/2006
Unlike the previous chapters, the pov for Draco n Hermione are different. I cant explain it. Like if you read the first chapter compared to this one, the style has already changed. There was more dialouge and flow. Now theres draco talking to himself about his bum.

but about the story, draco doesnt seem to have any feelings he just repeats he doesnt want a mudblood.

and muggle electronics dont work in hogwarts.
ArabianHermione chapter 4 . 11/15/2006
Nice chapter

the kissing thing was hillarious

and Draco getting chased by Griffindor's was priceless

But I'm not going to comment on the weekly question since I've been writing Previously on (the title of my story) since forever so u might have snatched the idea from me lol just kidding no offence no offence! Lol
HeyyBabyy chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Rolls eyes
ambie176 chapter 3 . 11/10/2006
I like it, its refreshing, you don't see many Hermione is obessed with Draco fics, I don't even recall reading one until now. I think it is funny. I don't want to see Draco any less mean, but I would love to see him mysterous, not so snobby, maybe even a little regret after being mean to her. I have an idea of what could happen after the potion, you can email me if you are interested.
Kae-Lae chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
OMG, this is so good. Update soon!
grace chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
i love your story and your style of writing, it's very unique and very funny! when you were the narrator and telling the readers about your personal waiting episode! hilarious. and yes i do feel like we're trailing the two around the school, keep up the good work :)
green phoenix chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
Gr! That was totally mean, Draco! Of course, what should we expect. He is after all, Draco Malfoy. :P Anyway, good job and keep going.

SoMe wEirDo chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
im fine with your style of writing _ it's very unlike other stories and keep it that way. Lol. can't wait to see what happens next. although draco couldv'e been a little nicer but he's draco. so evil and hot
rupertsgirlie chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
ok i love your writing style and how you make us feel like we are actually there totally cool and i haven't seen it done before! i don't think you need to tell us exactly the date time place etc. i mean you could be like we followed hermione into the heads common room or something i don't mind know where they are but i think sometimes it seems a bit awkward. lol i can't wait for more and to see how it works out and why draco would hate hermione even if she wasn't muggleborn. -tricia
uselessacct chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
this is actually a really funny story. hope you dont mind if i add this to my faves. i think the whole "hermione obsessed with draco" thing is a great idea. it's a little twist to the whole head-boy and head-girl thing that people tend to write around here. and i love the way you write. its fun to hear it from a different pov. and i do have some ideas after the love potion. like... if you wanted a drama effect, it could be when draco finally falls for her, but then all of a sudden she forgets... which is kind-of like the notebook...? or to make the story longer, the tables turn and draco starts chasing after her, but seems to have blaise as a rival... or something like that? i dont know, it just really depends on how you want to end it.
swishyswash chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
This is very, very good. I really hope you update soon!
Addicted2Love chapter 3 . 11/8/2006
great chapter! and i like the change in pov- allows us to see the events in diff perspectives
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