Reviews for Mr Maybe
Someday's Tuscany chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
meto2510 chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
love it
Addicted2Love chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
o- im liking this story! more please!
cutiexoxo chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
Rana Al Alawi chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
LOVE LOVE LOVE the first chapter p good work i think this will turn out to be a really successfull story..excuse my spelling. Anyway, Update son!

Silidons chapter 1 . 10/26/2006

I really like the style of writing, especially in the Narrator P.O.V, and the rule for seventh years.

Good luck with the next chapter, I look forward!

SoMe wEirDo chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
your story is great so far 0 I can't wait to read more.. but then maybe you could lessen up on the brand stuff a little bit xD lol.. but then it's your story so heheh. I'm fine with it. update son
rupertsgirlie chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
uh i like it! i can't wait to see what happens next.

Ashley chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
i am goin 2 die. how can u be so cruel and leave me in suspense like that. don't u have any consideration for the reader. yea update soon. i really enjoyed your story and can't wait for more.
sweet.sonata chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
HAHA! I loved the way you wrote the narrator part.. hilarious!

Please udate soon!
anon chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
not bad...pretty good so far. i love the idea. update soon
GermanPrincess21 chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Update soon! Good story so far!
Emi-Bum chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Hey, I love this story so far please update asap.



dramioneshipper chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I love the commentary you put in, and your overall writing style! One thing, try not to put so much stock in clothing brands...or clothing description. It's not needed and makes people who can't afford that drool lol. Also, I'm not sure you should portray Hermione as a brand girl...But other than that I'm totally putting your story on story alert!
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