Reviews for The Archangels
capten penpen chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
your talent i beter then mine that is why i started wrighting fanfiction
The Glorious Executioner chapter 2 . 11/16/2006
Another good chapter. You should make a Fire Emblem one, If your a fan of it, that is.
The Glorious Executioner chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
Once again, another good opener. Can't wait for more.
GAT-X101 chapter 2 . 11/13/2006
good story so far but you mispelled Kensuke, but other than that its going good...update soon
katyn1 chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
I enjoy the writing but there some rather odd inconsistencies.

I presume that third impact never happened. IF that is the case then why is Shinji lamenting the fact he killed 17 of god's messenger's when he has only ever SEEN 16 of them?

I also get the impression you don't really like Asuka. Please try to keep her in character.
BummKing chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
I like! I have nothing else to say but...I like it!
Ghost of Meat chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
its just too short
aimee riddle chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I like this. My ex got me into Evangelion, and I've yet to find a fic I enjoyed on it. This one is off to a good start. The only thing I can think to suggest is that you make you're chapters a little bit longer. I loved the stream of consisousness. I hope you keep writing.