Reviews for Breaking the Ordinary
GingerSnapsBack chapter 3 . 7/30/2011
Make them dress up as girls or maids(I was bored -.-) I love this story. Keep it up :)
Sullens children chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
That story ,all 3 chapters ,are awesome. me and my brother love them make a new chapter please! i think you should burn riku/sora alive
jazzstfu chapter 1 . 8/24/2009

Do you know how much I wanna' bash your ass?

I dunno' why...I just wanna' bash you...


But I won't.

'Cause I'm going to be nice.

But, why don't you like Sora?

*Fingers twitch on the keyboard to write horrible things*
Beth chapter 3 . 1/2/2009
White Wolf of the C.O.C.A chapter 3 . 2/24/2007
its coolish
Kyo of the COCA chapter 3 . 12/30/2006

it's really good so far, so try to update this and the love one with the 4 girls. (ask me if you don't know what i'm talking about.)

just tink of it like this: more places to torture Sora!
Maple Story of Anime of COCA chapter 3 . 12/12/2006
Hm... I LOVE SORA! But for Your sake I give you permission to murder him. As for Riku...Let him die a slow and painfull torture of listening to the Barney theme song.


Yuki Sohma
who-wiomen-101 chapter 2 . 12/5/2006
PLEASE WRITE MORE NOW! (yes i read the 3rd chapter too!)
YaOiPrInCeSs16 chapter 3 . 12/5/2006
Hey!Wuz up?Got your review so now IM reviewing your story!Update soon!The story is really good and funny too!:)
musicalpickle chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
That was really cool. I hope you update soon because I'm hooked on your story now.
White Wolf of the C.O.C.A chapter 2 . 11/8/2006
For anyone who dosn't know the C.O.C.A stands for the Commitee of Co-Authors. I don't know why Jen just uses The C.O.C.A for her pen name. The rest of us put something in front or behind the C.O.C.A . LIKE ME. Hope you are more enlightened, The White Wolf of the C.O.C.A., AKA Heather
Elizabeth Bolton chapter 3 . 11/8/2006

(P.S. Though them in a pool of man eating fish!)
Anime-17 chapter 3 . 11/6/2006
i'll say it then too! AW! luv the fluff! nice story

Yamiko Number 7 chapter 3 . 11/5/2006
So. You've got 14 reviews and you need a fifteenth to post the next chapter, right?

Well, here it is. Post away.

Although I really don't think you'll like this very much.

I noticed that your profile states you "hate Mary Sues."

What do you think Andrea is? Let's make a list:

~ IQ of 250

~ Telepathic

~ Wings

~ Canon characters fawn all over her

~ Riku is her TWOO WUB


~ A prophecy about her and her TWOO WUB saving the world

~ A terrible horrible disease that may KILL HER, oh noes!

Sweetheart, she is undeniably and irrefuatbly a Mary Sue.

That being said, I would like to see the next chapter. There's always hope for redemption, after all.
KH meerkats chapter 1 . 11/4/2006

What does the C.O.C.A. stand for?
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