Reviews for Rubicon
ne71 chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Excellent. Very well done. You've got a real gift for narrative. I also like the personalities you've given to the original characters - Jim's roommate in Stanford and his sister. It just seemed right.

Nice work.
Padfoot Reincarnated chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Wow. I am amazed. This was...too good for words.
Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Wow. This is incredible- you really got inside Jim's head. WOW.
Scary-Girly chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
that was really good! NICE JOB!
bredalot chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Very nice. Again with the spelling mistakes (did you know you put an extra i in Australia?) but that's ok. The last line is beautifully tragic, especially when compared to the section before. I'm a little sad that he doesn't end up with Pam, but I do like Karen, and I like your characterization of her. I especially like the taste comparison.
WingWoman chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote this. Very nice.
localizy chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Hot damn you made me tear some tears for Jim.

Good Job!