|Reviews for When Elements Collide|
| mountainrush2 chapter 9 . 7/31/2010
| DaughterofPoseidon25 chapter 9 . 10/11/2009
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE and UPDATE.
| Kurogani chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
there is a song we will survie hehhe! and keep going!
| Olive chapter 9 . 3/2/2008
Amazing! I loved the story. you should finish it.
| Insane Dream chapter 9 . 2/29/2008
I love this!
| na chapter 9 . 6/17/2007
uh...i think you have cute ideas but you just dont know to really write them out. the structure is well, unstructured and everything happens to quickly. i suggest using outlines or even pre-writing to make sure your story makes sense. like it would have been nice to know beforehand that iroh and sokka were not at the camp with aang. that kinda threw me. but whatever your characters are good (especially kazi very cute) and like i said it has a lot of creativity, it just needs a little work.
happy writing _
| inky-yemil chapter 2 . 5/19/2007
great just like the last one please keep writing i do enjoy it.
| inky-yemil chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
i love your story i realy hope you carry on can you please email me at oh and itollaly ship zutara.
| PerfectPictureOfInnocence chapter 9 . 5/12/2007
I've just begun to read this story, I only just came accross it the other day. And I really like 's wellwritten and original. I'm glad they (Zuko and Katara) made up. The whole thing about Kazi and Klairo - or Kai, surprised me, it's an interesting twist, I kind of feel a bit sorry for Kazi she obviously wants to fight and do her part...
Also ... Yay ... Zuko ... Katara ... KISS ... Yay ...
!ZUTARA! ... FoReVeR ...
| dancingcinnaminrolls chapter 9 . 5/8/2007
i just started reading this story and i think its really good. i feel kind of bad for kazi. she sounds like a great earth bender, yet she will not be allowed to help fight beside her friends because she's royalty. in a way that should mean the same for zuko than.
| Renowitz chapter 9 . 5/7/2007
Wicked story, I like it a lot, a very good plot and everything! I hope you continue soon!
| K. East chapter 9 . 5/7/2007
Wow, okay, secrets all around. XD
w00t for plot twists!
| TheAbsenteeWriter chapter 9 . 5/6/2007
SPLEE! i love it! i love it! i love zutara! i love you two! SPLEE! NO, i do not ship, but if i did.. so tophaang and zutara. *cough*
Anywhoo, i am sure you know deviant art? well, im drawing one based on the part where she cuts her hair off! WOOT! Smexy bonding rite there! Do you know how AWSOME this STORY is?
it is ubernactulantulously supirioricaly obesly splendedly SPLEE!
Thanks again for this! i just read all nine chapters straight. Now ima make the deviant. look for it! (same account name: TimeStream)
Bye my fellow avatard!
| come-by-chance chapter 9 . 5/6/2007
wow, the whole klario things twist - a good one! can't wait to see more. oh yeah, maybe you could bring the others into the story a bit more? yeah, looking 4ward to your next chapter
| Mightywolf128 chapter 9 . 5/6/2007
gosh... the people shure do cry a lot. But ah well it's a good story. Keep up the good work! Keep'em comen.