Reviews for California Dreaming
Sarai chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I like it!
CircleSky chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Well done! Thank you for writing!
Opy chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
I really liked this, very well done. I would love to see a sequel!
autumn brights chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
This was really honest. I mean, it seems ridiculous when I read stories where Rory goes after Jess in California or Philadelphia, etc., to be with him. That wouldn't work out; she would end up full of regret and unhappiness with the choices she made. They would end up hurting each other again anyways, because they always do.

Really realistic. I like it.
MarlyCook chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
No construtive criticism coming from me! I love love love this story.. It made tears form in my eyes.. Jess was so open, and Rory listened to him, and didn't yell.. I loved it.. it would be awesome if you made a sequel to this where Rory comes back to California for him. It would be really good. But if you want to leave it as a oneshot that's good too. You write well... again, I loved it!