|Reviews for Neon Ray|
| mad-zelda-cryaotic chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
That was really sweet- thank you for writing it :D
| Seinakyou chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Ah, it's so good! I really enjoy how you make the characters seem alive and serious and silly all at once. It's a very well written piece, kudos!
| curlytail16 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
very great indeed
theres a lot of onefics out there but this has got to be THE BEST!
And is the story out of all of them that ive read that has the most ic chters.
in other words this story wins my heart over most of the 10-15 chp fics. good work
| Twilight Okami chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
I loved it. There aren't a lot of good Okami fanfictions, but this one was briliant. You some how made Issun in character and his thinking about Ammy was so realistic, even the Game Makers be impressed :). A simple yet pleasing IssunxAmmy friendship.
| Lang Noi chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Oh my goodness, this is so cute! Between Issun's complaining and Ammy's undeniable insistence on doing the right thing...Aww...
This is just such a heartwarming story.
| Bamboofoxfire Productions chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
This is really good, especially for a one-shot. Well written
| Nicole Silverwolf chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
I love Issun's stubborn refusal to think of Ammy as anything other than a foolish wolf at times. His voice in your writing is spot on, just like the game. I particularly like "This silly furball? Guide us?". That for some reason just felt like it could have slipped right into a game cutscene.
The section about feeding every animal she comes across was wonderful. I like how Issun doesn't really get it until he mentions it and realizes that Ammy isn't doing this for no reason.
Thanks so much for this, the game is one of my favorites of all time and this was a great tribute to the fandom!
| Emm123 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
OMG!Aw,so cute!But I was hoping for a little more AmmyXIssun,but I suppose there is some,if you awesome,though.
| SilverWolfFire chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
This was very cute! I could see Ammy giving Issun a blank stare after he asked her why she had to feed every animal. :) Keep up the good work!
| HellsingFanaticperson chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Awesome! Okami is the best game ever and Issun is right, feeding all the monkeys, rabbits, dog, cats, boar, pigs, and deer can get quite time consuming!
Good narrative, you can feel the bond growing as Issun tells his tale .
| Voxxx chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
First Okami fanfiction? Sweet. :)
| Thirdly chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
| Estrella85 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Great one-shot! Well written and very sweet. :)
| Figment of an Imagination chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
AWW! SO CUTE! :D :D
| Excelsior chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
Simply Amazing, everyone was in character, and the writing was great and had its own sense of charm to it. This fanfic is my favorite Okami fanfic by far, amazing.