|Reviews for Zanpakuto?|
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 64 . 2/25
| star's dreams chapter 64 . 2/25
SD: Ironically I realize this is like what actually like in any fight in fiction. It just Kenpachi vocalizing it make it that more funny. Still you made some strong point especially at the end. Keep writing and inspiring others.
| jackjak chapter 63 . 11/3/2013
Well I've enjoyed the story so far and most if the elements you have introduced that said my only gripe is you saying the story will end in a few chapters.
That just doesn't do the story justice imo, and any ending within three chapters would just seem rushed. I mean when you began the story it was about kenpachi's journey to become stronger by talking to his sword and the unexpected consequences that resulted. Now it seems you're making it all about the trial and if you end it with the trial's conclusion so many things are left in the balance.
| Mistletainn chapter 4 . 10/19/2013
Well damn... I didn't expect Zaraki would ask an advice from... HER. This chapter was written years ago right? And you made him confide in the First Kenpachi? What a scary coincidence dude... :v
Coz, after all ,following your logic, it is very possible for Zaraki to ask Ukitake Juushirō instead of the First Kenpachi :v
| slytherin's daughter chapter 63 . 10/12/2013
Absolutely brilliant story.
Please update soon
| Lyell chapter 63 . 9/25/2013
2 more chapters?! Are they gonna be long ones? What are you going to do with Piecrust? Is Kurotsuchi be executed or sent back to the maggots nest? What will happen to Nemu when her 'Dad' is sent off? Will Atonomatsuri and Kenny finally bury the hatchet?
I realise the challenges will be called off because of all this, but I think I'd like to know the score again anyway. Could you give a little recap at the start of the next chapter? (Whenever that could be...)
Thanks. I hope Zaraki dosn't give you too much grief while you write the next chapters.
| Guest chapter 63 . 9/25/2013
| Pensive Rumination Observer chapter 25 . 7/8/2013
Sorry, this is far as I can read, this whole fic is largely incomprehensible to me and some of the 'leaps of logic' made by some of the characters within hold no logic that I can understand...
May I say that your mind seems to be a very dark and scary place.
| Pensive Rumination Observer chapter 16 . 7/8/2013
Yuki "Piecrust" Hisutanga reminds me of the early Naruto Uzumaki...
| ssw777 chapter 42 . 5/26/2013
You didn't say that I couldn't mess with the lines' heads until they beg to divulge their secrets. When you attempt to cover every avenue you tempt the detail oriented into finding a loophole .
| ssw777 chapter 33 . 5/25/2013
Honestly I was expecting the man to be the reincarnation of the past captain but, that works just as well.
| snowecat chapter 62 . 5/23/2013
Good to see a new chapter, but it's getting boring with Kenpachi always telling his sword to shut up and not listen to her. I have no inkling on how they are going to resolve their differences if at all.
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 62 . 5/23/2013
| star's dreams chapter 62 . 5/22/2013
SD: I heard the first one but never the second. Can you tell me the second story meaning? Anyway always glad for an update no mater when. I like how deep you can get within only a few moment in your story. I be here for next chapter.
| Sage of wind Dragons chapter 62 . 5/22/2013
ok I hope these super hollows know how to put up a decend fight, and I guess Kenpachi will get to think about what his hollow self used to be up to and all, I wonder if he and yamomto ever will talk about that? be interesting if Kenpachi just makes a few comments saying hes aware of it again and Yamomto responds in kind, no big lengthy discussion or anything but still. Your Kenpachi is really old now that I think about it.
wouldent such things be fun?
anyway I hope the poisoned super hollows come up with some interesting stuff and that Kenpachi starts to actually use his shikai and all.