Reviews for Royal Flush
Pathseekerme chapter 18 . 2/2
Great job of writing this story! I love it!
Archleone chapter 15 . 1/30
If you ever plan to write again, you really need to work on keeping internal consistency in your writing. For most of the story, Harry had been gone for nine years. In this chapters, everyone kept saying he was gone for seven.
Archleone chapter 14 . 1/30
This story is super abandoned, so I doubt your or anyone really cares at this point, but there's quite a few inaccuracies in this chapter compared to the previous ones.

One example would be the NAMBLA joke being used again, only Hermione acted like she didn't know what it meant despite Harry having told her a few chapters ago. Another would be Hermione calling herself a halfblood, when she's a muggleborn.
Docholiday024 chapter 12 . 2/15/2016
when you have short chapters it kinda kills the story when a 1/4 of it is A/N's makes a guy not want to read it
noylj chapter 5 . 11/24/2015
She is falling for him why?
'Cause he's rich and has muscles? Seems pretty superficial.
noylj chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
Drawing to an inside straight on the river?
And, he wins?
miguce chapter 17 . 10/23/2015
enjoyed this..
DukeBrymin chapter 14 . 9/30/2015
Umm, didn't Harry already explain what NAMBLA stood for?
chris chapter 14 . 5/30/2015
if i remember correctly from the books,Remus complained about being irritable 2 days before the full moon,and was in pain from the transformation 2 days after the transformation but did not change the day after the full moon.
fireball900 chapter 18 . 5/29/2015
I loved Harry's pre-duel presentation.
Hope you continue this.
fireball900 chapter 8 . 5/29/2015
I think Don Raphael may be my favourite character in this. It's so rare for there to be a character with an antagonistic relationship with the protagonist, yet, still be willing to help him. And be intelligent and understanding when the protagonist annoys him.
LWJ2 chapter 18 . 2/15/2015
Nice story, I do hope you pick it up again. Thanks for sharing it.
LWJ2 chapter 11 . 2/15/2015
I'm enjoying this. NAMBLA. Buwahahahahaha. That's great, I'd never have thought of it and I'm delighted you did.
at-nightfall chapter 5 . 9/9/2014
Hermione should not have to a big problem with jet lag. She went the easy direction, lengthening her day. She could have slept some hours on the plane.
Going back from the US to UK is the big jet lag problem. I needed one week in 1999 and two weeks in 2001.
Starfox5 chapter 18 . 3/3/2014
Very good Story - I love this alternate aftermath, and war against Voldemort.
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