|Reviews for Going in Circles|
| Dark-flames chapter 6 . 1/1/2008
Amused, happy, laughing, awing... And bthw yes you do know how to write angst, there's a tipsy bit of it a little here and there... And you do it oh so well ).
"“I’m not letting you stay up late anymore,” Sam said. “The Sci-Fi Channel is not good for you.”" haha
| Jensen chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Okay haven't read the story yet (okay weird time to review) but I just wanted to remark on the "I was told my last story was too complicated" - there's no such thing as a story too complicated, only people too simple to understand it. So far you rock as a writer, so ignore any comments like that!
| kwater chapter 6 . 7/12/2007
Another great one,, I love the little tidbits you throw in your stories about their childhoods, they always seem spot on to how I see the boys growing up... thanks for the great read- K
| kwater chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
Gotta hate a guy with glowing eyes.. Great story so far, can't wait to finish...k
| Marvin is my Muse chapter 6 . 7/11/2007
This story was amazing! And so hilarious! Tom was great and the whole scene with Jo and Simon and his wife. The whole thing was really well written and I loved Tom! He reminded me of Ronald from Nightshifter! (except Dean liked Ronald!)
Loved this story - it was really really really great! Hee!
| Diva0789 chapter 6 . 3/30/2007
that was amazing! i definetly agree with Dean raising sam. that is definetly how it happened. lol. cant wiat for your next story! yay you!
| heather03nmg chapter 6 . 2/18/2007
That was hysterical, loved the salt packets and Star Trek references. Great job!
| Xdaisy chainX chapter 6 . 1/17/2007
lol this was one of the funnier ones. :)
| carole chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
For me, part one ends with:
Dean shrugged. “He probably tripped over his own feet.”
“Still… You mind?” Sam asked, looking back at the farmer.
I've hit refresh a couple times, but it doesn't seem to help.
| stealthyone chapter 6 . 11/15/2006
Poor Tom, thinking he's thisclose to making a big alien discovery, and then Dean and Sam shoot him down. LOL at him calling the boys Men in Black.
It always took forever to get the smell of smoke out of his clothes. Hazard of the job. As often as they ended up burning corpses, they probably smelled like two pack a day smokers and just couldn’t tell it anymore.
I really like those details. I'm sure that they must often smell rather smoky.
“There was a woman,” Tom frowned in concentration. “I think… I think I kissed her.”
Dean’s mouth quirked up on one side. “Well, that must have been a new experience.”
“First we’re avenging angels and now we’re the Man keeping the little guy down,” Dean sighed. “We just can’t win tonight.”
“I’m not letting you stay up late anymore,” Sam said. “The Sci-Fi Channel is not good for you.”
Dean just grinned. “Beam me up, Scottie.”
Cute last exchange between the boys to round out the story.
I really enjoyed this one. As usual, good banter and a good plot, along with solid characterization. Looking forward to your next piece. :)
| stealthyone chapter 5 . 11/15/2006
I love Dean’s quick recap, and I love this line:
“The three rules of real estate,” Dean sighed. “Location, location, location.”
*g* Oh Dean, you are so very amusing. :)
| stealthyone chapter 4 . 11/15/2006
Naughty, naughty Simon. And that twist at the end? Really good. :)
While they were talking, he had slowly been making his way around Tom to stand next to Dean. He wasn’t armed and Dean didn’t need the added worry of trying to protect someone standing opposite him.
I love this, how aware Sam is of his proximity to Dean, and why he needs to get closer.
“You are avenging angels,” Joe said. “You were sent here to help me.”
“Hold on there, buddy,” Dean said, looking stunned. “I’m pretty sure every preacher in town just sat up and said, ‘heck, no.’”
| stealthyone chapter 3 . 11/15/2006
Ooh, very exciting chapter, what with the boys in some peril, and Simon being all twitchy and mysterious, and then Tom being … different. Hmm …
“Sammy?” he demanded, smacking him lightly.
“Don’t hit me,” Sam mumbled, still not opening his eyes. “Trying to breathe.”
Tom came to with a gasp, dragging in great gulps of air. He took one look at Dean and then promptly passed out again.
“I’m going to try not to take that personally,”
| stealthyone chapter 2 . 11/15/2006
One thing I like in this story is that Tom is kind of a mirror of Dean in terms of getting geeked up about the unexplained. Dean can laugh all he wants, but they both share a passion for their work. *g*
Black dots began to swim in front of his eyes and Sam faintly realized he wasn’t breathing. But it was a distant realization and one that he could do nothing about. The pressure against his body was simply so great that he couldn’t make his chest expand to allow his lungs to fill. His ears were ringing, his blood pounding audibly. He was going to suffocate in a wide open field.
Good description here. Made *me* feel breathless. :)
| stealthyone chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Bored!Dean. Crop circles. Another person using an EMF meter. Sounds like the makings of yet another good story. :)
“You know why I like Indiana so much?” Dean asked.
Sam only raised an eyebrow in response.
“It’s the scenery. It’s always changing. Sometimes the corn’s on the left. Sometimes it’s on the right.”
*g* I so love bored!Dean. He amuses me greatly.