|Reviews for Fish Bird|
| gabrielle angelique chapter 22 . 12/20/2013
This is the kind of stories that makes me stay up during the night. It makes me sad to know that this was last updated last year and i was hooked into it. Would love to know how it all ends and I will be adding this to my favorites in the hopes of this one getting finished. Love ypur work.
| Sasunaru sasu chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
By the way
How does the summary links to the story?
| Sasunarusasu chapter 22 . 9/1/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I like the development of sasunaru's relationship and the big big plot ..!
I feel bad for sasuke though . Everyone's accusing him of something. He deserve a break :(
And I wish naruto would finally realize what sasuke is willing to do for for him.
Don't like Sakura...but you portrayed her as a tolerable character ...so kind of like her . I hope she doesn't get into the way of sasunaru !
Like the angsty going round the story:)
You have done a wonderful job of turning language in an art work . This story is beautifully written :DDD
BUT I realized the last update of this story:(
Aren't you going to update ? T_T
| 2b4thewrld chapter 22 . 8/19/2013
Thanks tons! I love this fanfic.
| Kaka chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
PLEASE update fish bird! I keep coming back here wishing for some updates. It's honestly the best fanfiction I've ever read and it's such a shame if there won't be an ending.
| VitaniSachi115 chapter 22 . 7/15/2013
This is like Naruto meets The Demonata, it's crazy awesome!
| Shiroxcat chapter 22 . 4/27/2013
Oh no, why did I have to read so fast all available chapters, so I don't have anything to read now ;( I saw your story some time ago, but try to resist to read it, because I saw the date of last update. After one of your post on your lj ( where you posted someone's review ) I just couldn't resist anymore and I was really in need to read something good! Of course you or rather your story didn't disappoint me! I like how you perfect portrayed Sasuke and Naruto relationship progress, from 'hate' and awkard interaction you was able to change it into deep devotion toward each other. And all of this you wrote really naturally, so I'm really impressed and jealous! I also like how you amazingly described all these frightening scenes and monsters, so I nearly got a chills while reading it. I wasn't prepared in this story for so scary things! But I've to admit that it's positive surprise, maybe you should add to genre horror or supernatural? Or you want to keep a mysterious aura and make a surprise for readers? I'm glad that you in the end decided to write that plot twist with Kiba, I sensed already, when they found him that something is wrong with him, but I was afraid that you won't write anything twisted with him. Y'know pression from readers could be difficult to handle. I hope you know what I mean. It was also enjoyable to get to know all clues slowly, not just reading everything in one chapter. At first it was a bit frustrating to not knowing what's going on and being worried that I could miss something, like with that chakra restriction or from where that 'things' came, but in the end it turned out to be enjoyable. I imagine that it was difficult to not write too much secrets at once and part by part acquaint reader with plot? I'm also happy that you was able to keep everyone in character, even Sakura ( many people unconciously change her, when her role includes to be the one who stands between Sasuke and Naruto relationship ). I enjoyed all moments with Sasuke and Naruto, including their great conversations ( even when they're arguing like a mad dogs ) or sex scenes. Only things with bothered me was that you used word 'kitsune' for describing Naruto. It's not like I have something against of using this word, but I just have a bad association with it in fanfics. In many childish fanfics, where for example Naruto is a fox, Sasuke a wolf, authors tend to describe Naruto as 'kitsune', so I just don't have a good memories with that word XD wouldn't be a blond/blonde better for describing Naruto? Second thing, which bothered me was the fact that Naruto in front of Sakura was betraying her with Sasuke ( like letting kiss him ). Even if he explained to Sakura what it's between him and Sasuke, I still can't imagine that he would do that to her. Of course I can be just oversensitive about it ( after all my exboyfriend do that to me ), so don't take it personally.
As for next chapter, I wonder what exactly these 'things' ( sorry I don't have an idea how to call them ) want from Naruto, is it bijuu or the fact that he is precious to Sasuke? It's a bit confusing for me. I have bad premonition that Sasuke and Naruto will die together, after Naruto's promise to Sakura :(
I hope that you didn't lose interest in writing this story, because it's really well-written and I see that you over thought plot, so please don't abandon it :) and congratulations for yout 500th fav! And I love your icon with Nicolas Cage XD
| hotcat chapter 22 . 4/7/2013
cant wait for more
| Narusasu lover chapter 22 . 3/25/2013
Love love your story please come back
| justanotherwriterchic chapter 22 . 3/11/2013
You're writing is incredible and I'm so hooked on this story. I hate the tragedy of everything that's going on but I love it too and I can't unhook myself from the roller coaster of emotion that is SasuNaru. I just want to know what happens next so please continue :)
| DemonFoxZaku chapter 22 . 2/23/2013
| Narutopokefan chapter 22 . 12/22/2012
Please update soon :) ! Bye
| Narutopokefan chapter 9 . 12/22/2012
Poor naru :( ! Please update soon bye
| Narutopokefan chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
Poor naruto :( ! Please update soon bye
| Failing Mentality chapter 15 . 11/21/2012
Hm, maybe the statue was pointing at an escape direction? My attempt at trying to find humor in this morbid situation and infinitely sad state of events (Naruto, let him admit it, and you admit it yourself, too!) is severely lacking.
The plot and everything is much, much deeper and thicker than I thought. I like!