Reviews for Stereotype? No, Thank You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing you're not updating this anymore... unfortunately... still, awesome story |
![]() ![]() If there's more, please continue... Their friendship in this fic is gold Never seen anything like it. So, do me, I mean US a favor, ne? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL that ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fluff :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice fanfic! |
![]() ![]() Please never give up on this story. It is very good. |
![]() ![]() Honestly, I think that this could actually get published, it's amazing and it holds so much emotion the reader feels what the character is feeling. I love it. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! It was fucking amazing! This should be a fucking book! You did great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww..I'm not sure if this chapter was actually meant to be the ending, but even if it wasn't it was really good. This story was amazing and I enjoyed evryt second of it :) your writing is really fun to read. I'll go check out ur other stories! -Dawn |
![]() ![]() I wish there was a protolouge... (This is the best naruxsasu fan fiction I've ever seen so far.) |
![]() ![]() Is this only 13 chaps long and can someone tell me wats going on? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I rarely leave reviews but I couldn't not write one for this! Well, it's not really reviewing the story much, but anyway... First of all, I love your writing style - Naruto's still a teenager trying to figure out who he is, and I think your writing really fits this theme. You also put a little bit of yourself in here, I think, and it makes the story seem much more real and raw and honest - that's probably the thing I love about this fanfic the most. Some things I could relate to a lot, so the story really struck a chord in me. Haha I really suck at this don't I. But basically I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story, it doesn't seem forced at all, it doesn't try too hard. I feel like it's written from the heart and that's beautiful. A part of me hopes you'll update some time but I'm pretty sure that won't happen. I can dream though right? :D |
![]() ![]() I - aghhh! Why?! I don't know anything anymore except that this is an amazing story. That most recent chapter could have been a perfect ending (but don't you dare stop updating!). I loved how you had different extended metaphors for each chapter like the bones. I honestly love this story so much. The character development was well done on Naruto and Sasuke. I look forward to your next update (please!)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a very unique style of writing that made this an adventure to read. I would have loved to read more, but it doesn't seem like you will be posting any new updates... Too bad. It looked like Sasuke & Naruto might finally be getting together within the next few chapters or at least that Naruto would decide the risks were worth it. |