|Reviews for Breakdown|
| ShoshanaFlower chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
You capture Lorna so well. She's not just a pathetic character suffering from post traumatic stress. She's an intelligent, self-aware woman who, granted, has some serious post traumatic issues. Wonderful insight into an aspect of Lorna that isn't always explored in detail in the comics. She knows how others preceive her, and she knows she's not okay, but she knows (?) she's not crazy. I like the ending as well. It's a good way to show her "crazy Lorna-ness" is intentional in some ways. I mean, what's a self-respecting woman to do in such a situation?
I'm going to stop babbling now. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for posting it.
| darkstorm5000 chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
Nice fic. Guess I've had a soft-spot for Lorna from all that she's been subjected to. And, I think you did a good job in capturing the fact that there are more sides to her and to what's going on with her than are usually displayed, which others sometimes seem to have the tendency to pass off as her just acting like her usual 'crazy Lorna' self.